Update soon kay I'll be here waiting! hugs for you!

'He couldn’t just asexually reproduce.'

For some reason, that whole notion just had me laughing, because I bet you he'd find a way to do even that -cough-

Anyway, Sasuke's asexual-ness aside, this wasn't half-bad for your first fic C:

Actually, the premise is rather intriguing, Sasuke losing his memories.

Though I'll admit, I think Sasuke's half was better written than Sakura's portion.

I don't know what it was, but I found reading her part slightly annoying (er...no almost-pun intended).

It might have been the way you wrote her dialogue with Tsunade, and the thoughts in between.

They kind of disrupted the flow for me - oh, and the hyperventilating,

I think it would have been more powerful if you didn't...dialogue that out?

xD Actually, I found that it was more humorous that way, unless humor was your intention, then keep it C:

Anyways, I think that if you got yourself an ace Beta-Reader, everything would be taken care of :D

All in all, it was a very good first fic, attempt C;

Goodluck on future endeavors, now!

F L ii C K

Update soon! I really love how its coming along! _

Lots of love always

kisa!

It's so amazing so far! Can't wait for chapter 10!

goo story

this is real good! but plz space ur story out more...the paragraphs are HUGE! it gives me a headache .

Loved it. Add more please.

Love the story. Update real soon!

I'm sorry I couldn't update sooner! The alert thingy was down so I didn't know that you had updated! SORRY! I'm glad you updated though! I love this story almost as much as I hate school! So whenever you get the chance, please update soon!

wow, great job, I don't mind that nothing has happened. Update soon!

great job. Update soon!

LOL, Chapter 3 had me laugh LOL! XD

Anyway, keep writing! -

norngpinky

great job! I love your story so please update as soon as you can!

Really good story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! _

I really don't think that your fanfic is an bad one. It's quite the opposite, really!

Your Chapters are indeed a bit short, but I don't mind, because I really like your style of writing and the story.

Hop to read the next chapter soon!

Greets, Lily