|Reviews for Secrets To Die For|
| Kisa167 2/11/08 . chapter 10
Update soon kay I'll be here waiting! hugs for you!
| Lady Flick 2/10/08 . chapter 1
'He couldn’t just asexually reproduce.'
For some reason, that whole notion just had me laughing, because I bet you he'd find a way to do even that -cough-
Anyway, Sasuke's asexual-ness aside, this wasn't half-bad for your first fic C:
Actually, the premise is rather intriguing, Sasuke losing his memories.
Though I'll admit, I think Sasuke's half was better written than Sakura's portion.
I don't know what it was, but I found reading her part slightly annoying (er...no almost-pun intended).
It might have been the way you wrote her dialogue with Tsunade, and the thoughts in between.
They kind of disrupted the flow for me - oh, and the hyperventilating,
I think it would have been more powerful if you didn't...dialogue that out?
xD Actually, I found that it was more humorous that way, unless humor was your intention, then keep it C:
Anyways, I think that if you got yourself an ace Beta-Reader, everything would be taken care of :D
All in all, it was a very good first fic, attempt C;
Goodluck on future endeavors, now!
F L ii C K
| Kisa167 1/8/08 . chapter 9
Update soon! I really love how its coming along! _
Lots of love always
| Nature-Fascination 7/26/07 . chapter 9
It's so amazing so far! Can't wait for chapter 10!
| Firerose1300 3/10/07 . chapter 8
| Kari Hibaki 3/10/07 . chapter 8
this is real good! but plz space ur story out more...the paragraphs are HUGE! it gives me a headache .
| Thine Dreamer Doth Take Flight 3/8/07 . chapter 8
Loved it. Add more please.
| The-Raven-Girl 3/7/07 . chapter 8
Love the story. Update real soon!
| AngelSachiya 11/26/06 . chapter 7
I'm sorry I couldn't update sooner! The alert thingy was down so I didn't know that you had updated! SORRY! I'm glad you updated though! I love this story almost as much as I hate school! So whenever you get the chance, please update soon!
| The-Raven-Girl 10/13/06 . chapter 6
wow, great job, I don't mind that nothing has happened. Update soon!
| The-Raven-Girl 9/23/06 . chapter 5
great job. Update soon!
| NorngPinky 9/20/06 . chapter 4
LOL, Chapter 3 had me laugh LOL! XD
Anyway, keep writing! -
| The-Raven-Girl 9/18/06 . chapter 4
great job! I love your story so please update as soon as you can!
| Aika16 9/8/06 . chapter 3
Really good story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! _
| Erinye 9/8/06 . chapter 3
I really don't think that your fanfic is an bad one. It's quite the opposite, really!
Your Chapters are indeed a bit short, but I don't mind, because I really like your style of writing and the story.
Hop to read the next chapter soon!