I like the way you showed Danny and Jazz's relationship in th end, particularly Danny singing the old "sitting in a tree" taunt. I'm reminded of the end of "Fenton Menace", since Jazz and Danny both wind up acting like kids in the end.

oh This is SO good! I can't believe I didn't know about this story until now!

Oh, man, this going to be good. I can't wait for the next one. You're good.

Great chapter its getting really intersting with Marz.

"I'd be its Hero?" what's that supposed to mean?

the villian is spectra. i can tel cus danny is starting to feel really depressed and not self-confident. i really liked this chappie. especially the end. i liked all of the quotes. and teh mime part was funny too. update ASAP!

And I thought Jack and Maddie were wierd (not that I don't like mimes...). I'm guessing Marz was named after Marcel Marceau, the famous french mime?

Now that I think about it, the title itself is a clue. I mean "Specter"/"Spectra"? I can't believe I didn't pick up on that one.

Hm, has an assiatant...makes her victims doubt themselves...could it be, oh I don't know, Spectra?

Marz is an awesome name! lol. i like this start. update ASAP!!

Hey, I like the story so far. This chapter was descriptive and well thought out. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapters.