*Sniff sniff* So beautiful. I knew Sasuke still loved his brother, but nobody ever believes me. Actually, they usually don't believe it when I say that Itachi still loves Sasuke :S.

aw that was sweet!! I really liked it

How cute! I always knew Sasuke loved his brother! Finally someone who agrees. That was totally cool. Continue, I want to know if Sasuke and Itachi ever can live happily together. This was cool. I love Itachi. I wanna go live with Itachi and be as important as Sasuke's nii-san! So cute! Good fic, even for a one-shot.

Wow...that was rlly awesome! That was so cute! ^_^

Idea for countining your story:

Sasuke gets all or nothing. NOTHING! NOTHING! NOTHING! I! AM! EVIL! Do the same format, still possitive, but Sasuke's reply is ALL negitive. And make Sasuke sound stupid, no. DON'T. Too many Sasuke fans out there, you'll get killed. But I'll write a story like that! They can't kill me. I have a brain. Scared? You should be.

This is a neat story with a good lesson/quote. But I dont think it is a 'story'. I think it would be more of a... I dont know, a jounal entry story combo? Anyways, it is still good :)

That's nice..

At least Some people are nice enough to comment NICELY on it, Mary. (oh, by the way, I knew you'd say that! :) so Mary)

I was supose to be the first reviewer!
weird, not lavina, weird... did i say WEIRD?

That was a neat way to do a story! Good Job~