 Lunar Maelstrom 2009-11-07 . chapter 3People have said it before, but I'll repeat their sentiments because it's the only thing you can say. Wow. This story is so beautiful and almost... ethereal. It's completely astounding, really. It's so... I mean, it's just... wow. Please, if you can find the time, continue this piece of writing. It's so enchanting. I just can't stop with the adjectives. Heh. |
 midnightwaters 2009-05-01 . chapter 3With every one of these I feel like I'm reading a very nicely crafted fairytale...please, please update this soon! |
 Maj Enn 2009-01-11 . chapter 3Wow.
Who is 'Them'? And how did they capture Toph, if she's 'the girl who moved mountains'? Surely she would be able to beat up 'Them'...
Elder's great grandson? this is confuzzling...so update soon!
iMAJ ENN |
 Nelja 2009-01-09 . chapter 1I really love this story. The fairytale aspect is, for me, the best thing in the Sokka-and-Yue relationship, and I love what the story has become very, very much... with all the epic and mythical exaggerations... |
 vine 2009-01-08 . chapter 3Such a unique idea- and almost painful to read. Not because of the writing. Because that is amazing. Not even the content, really- though that hurts to. The worst thing is the tone. It just speaks of ages and ages gone by, and hope lost, and broken things. I've held my breath through every chapter. |
 MungoJerry 2009-01-07 . chapter 3O... I think I heart this! XD |
 MungoJerry 2009-01-07 . chapter 1Auuwwgh... that last line makes me choke up a bit. *sniffles* |
 treeflamingo 2008-12-17 . chapter 3*ahem* It has been two years since you posted the third installment of this series. Is it appropriate for me to demand that you finish it? Because appropriate or not, I am demanding. |
 DJ Omegatron 2008-09-17 . chapter 1Legend:The warrior.
This one is truly EPIC. What possessed you? Your mind is truly unearthly to encompass such tales! |
 dormitos 2008-08-02 . chapter 1wow. this is really, really, beautiful, with an ethereal/stylized feel to it like an actual myth or fable. excellent and touching. |
 The One And Only Lobster 2008-06-26 . chapter 3I can't even articulate how I felt with these three chapters. I had a long review all typed out and I erased it, because it just... This is amazing. I have never added a story to my alerts before. So yeah. Just amazing. |
 Rose Gilmore 2008-04-29 . chapter 1Wow, that was a very beautiful first chapter! :D |
 The Pterodactyl 2008-04-12 . chapter 3Well, you knew I didn't think you'd ever update again...as for the convoluted part, good god Josie, this is ridiculous...But I can't wait for the next part.
The Pterodactyl |
 Kumori Doragon 2008-04-10 . chapter 3I actually never thought you'd update! Wow. Thanks for proving me wrong because this was amazing. The whole time I was reading it, three things were going through my mind. One: what the heck is going on? Two: this is absolutely brilliant. Three: why can't I write like this? Yes, you make other writers seem like children scribbling the alphabet. Have I mentioned I love this tease? I have no idea what's going to happen, but I'm starting to understand a bit. Which makes not knowing so much harder and so much more tantalizing. Geez, I can't even say how much I love this. I will definitely be looking forward to the next chapter now. So you better update soon!
KD |
 Shuisha 2008-04-10 . chapter 3Wow...you better post some answers soon... |