I am laughing so hard right now!! This is hilarious!! The ending is brilliant! Go You!

Hi there Max!

This is wonderful! As you said, to truly understand this fic, you need to have seen the movie Olliver!

As always, you manage to convey the reality and the whimsy in one tale. Superb the treatment of Hermione Granger.

The phrase that defines Hermione's attitude is: "A good meal is a well-balanced lunch, or dinner, or even breakfast". Nothing denounces a Know-it-all like a definition before harassing someone.

The only thing I wanted to see is a description of Hermione face as she stares at the well coregraphied dance of the Slytherins.

Keep up the good writing!

Manolo

HaHa. Awsome.

~Walks off humming Oliver! songs~

x°D