 Kairi Uzeniba 9/12/06 . chapter 1I love it! KnucklexRouge mushiness, terrific! I was thinking about making a KnucklesxRouge sometime, check it out if you want. Please continue!I'd love a deep, slobery kiss! O.k., maybe not slobery, but you know! I'd suggest getting rid of the italics, though, kinda pointless. The critics agree, (i.e. me) "A wonderful, gooey, story!" says Uzeniba Times, "Terrific, magificent, fluffy as a marshmallow" says "Kairi Says" O.k., better rap this up...Terrific! On my alert and faves! |
 Angelfaced DramaQueen 8/23/06 . chapter 1ME: aww, so cute! but seriously-do something about the format! OMG, this story is totally gona get deleted-whitch will suck coz i liked it and i hate to see good fics get deleted due to formating!
JADE: lose the italic and script. maybe upload it again
ME: but the story itself is really good-kepp it up (the fic, change the formating for your own good.)
JADE: good fic! |