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CrazyKidDeath 2008-07-14 ch 4,	abuselol, quite random. Shinji in drag, gah, scary image
AlehToxick 2008-06-26 ch 4, anon.	abuseLove it! Update soon, I wanna read the end of it!
Darknemo2000 2008-06-01 ch 4,	abuseA very enjoyable read so far, would not mind if you would make it longer, yet, i think in this particular chapter the added thoughts of Misato and Hikari were bit too confusing. You already built up the pace with Asuka and Shinji povs in your first three chapters and now adding those two (though it broke the routine) is bit too much, considering that you still keep on switching from Shinji and Asuka. Is it me or there are more Shinji's povs than Asuka's? Well at least in this chapter it was not to mention that Shinji's povs usually are longer than Asuka's, so I think yous should add bit more stuff on Asuka's povs to straighten things up. A nice enjoyable fic. Though it is bit weird that Asuka acts as if nothing happened considering the circumstances that got her into coma. I think you should add bit more description as to what characters are doing too. I really like how you do not go straight away of putting A/S into a couple straight away, I think they are hilarious the way they are, maybe a few more soft moments there and here but considering it IS Asuka it cannot get too soft. She is not the softy type after all. I really don't like when authors put them as fast as possible together. Look distastful, OOC and rushed. I think you are doing a pretty good job, though Asuka could be even more annoying than she is in your fic. And abusive. An enjoyable read one way or another. Work a bit on descriptive side and maybe extend the povs bit longer. everything else - really good and interesting so far. Oh and update more often. One year waiting period is bit too long. Good luck.
Alchemic Metal 2008-05-26 ch 4,	abuseglad to see this story up again, almost took it off my story alert list, but I'm glad i didn't. Very good chapter, hope i don't have to wait a year for the next lol.
CelticReaper 2008-05-21 ch 4,	abuselol XD update soon
117 2008-05-20 ch 4, anon.	abuseXD Poor Shinji, he'll never get any at this rate!
Dockit 2008-05-20 ch 4,	abuseHey hey! Glad to see you're still alive and updated this story. Great chapter.
Hououza 2008-05-19 ch 4,	abuseExcellent chapter. Personally I think it worked out beautifully, some highly amusing moments, in particular the last line... I feel sorry for Shinji, although I am more worried about the bet Asuka made with Hikari. Hopefully this time at least it will be something in his favour. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
Anonymous 2008-05-18 ch 3, anon.	abusePlease update soon, this story is far from forgotten!
Plainred 2007-09-14 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is a great fic! :] Really funny! Poor Shinji! But I think he likes it all the same^^ Love your fics! Keep up the good work! XD
Sailor Star Dust 1 2007-07-08 ch 3,	abuseAsuka rapping? Oh dear God. O_o; Still, very funny! Did you come up with the words yourself? Heh, I feel bad for Shinji being accused of fapping when he actually wasn't. (I don't really get WHY Asuka calls him a perv when he's not really...) And the ending made me chuckle. :P Great job, this was cute!
Sailor Star Dust 1 2007-07-08 ch 2,	abuse>“You may have grown a few inches but I can still beat that cockiness you call a spine out of you." Damn straight! Shinji=Spine, weird. ^^; Cute and amusing chapter though, I liked how Asuka being psychically strong was mentioned. And its great how Shinji had a growth spurt. Dunno if you know this, but the scene in EoE when Shinji says "I want to see them again, because I believe my feelings were real." shows a group photo, hinting people returning Post-3I. The main hint? Shinji being taller than Asuka in the picture! ^_^
Sailor Star Dust 1 2007-07-08 ch 1,	abuseWell that was odd but cute. ^^;
hellhound777 2007-06-23 ch 3,	abusethis is one of the most enjoyable storys i have read on this site. please update soon
evil chick 2007-06-20 ch 3,	abuseman I love this, I gave up the whole Asuka/Shinji comedy thing a long time ago but you make it awesome :D I love the fact that you switch from character's point of views giving a broader way of telling the story. Good idea! thumbs up

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