very good!

Cool Story

i LOVE THE STORY IT FRIKKIN ROCKS! XD

this is really good ^.^

Your story was great, and 'cause I'm pretty new (:P) I've discovered it this morning. Anyway, I loved it. I'm sure gonna read the sequel.

Bye,
Lisette

The start was quite good! Though when you went into details about her beauty it was a bit discouraging... but otherwise it's pretty good, and I probably just missed it - but where'd she get the sword from?? Eh, I'll figure it out. Great story so far for me though!

nice start, i really like this i'll continue reading it

this is pretty good

AW I LOVED IT!! THE HOLE THING! Haha anyway I'm off to read the sequel ;)

hehe as soon as i seen all the word review over and over again i though 'might as well' haha

i really like it but its 3 am and i must leave for sleep :( before the birds start cherping bye!

Erm, the thing is, I would read it, but it's literally two in the morning. Sleepy time... Z...Z...

AWESOME!!
I FORGOT WHAT "WIOL ONO" MEANT!! Ah well, that's what the original is for! *gets out book*
AND MAY YOUR SWORD STAY SHARP! ^_^

Ooh! I'll take your shoe please! *eats shoe* Tastes like cookies! ^_^
The story is still has fascinating as ever!

*begins singing loudly* MURTAGH AND DANIELLE, SITTING IN A CELL! K-I-S-S-I-N-G! FIRST COMES LOVE, I'll shut up now. XD
Great job! Sorry I didn't review sooner, I've been off, for, like, forEVer!