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| ByTheBeautifulSea 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseit may have been random, but it was hilarious! i loved it, and can't wait to read more! |
| Dark-Angel.Forever 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseI think your story was pretty good, but it is written in a kind of weird way. Also the grammar isn't totally good. Some practise and I think you'll write some good fanfics. suc-6, -x- |
| understatementoftheyear 2006-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseDespite indeed being extremely random it is infact an interesting story an shows imaginative potential. Well done! |
| mouseclick815 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abusei enjoyed that |
| missy42 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseShe's so, like, the girl in second grade beating up on her crush! Oh, and nods is with only one "d." ♥ missy42 |
| Lostlover5 2006-08-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, you're right. That was very random. |