LMAO! Awesome.

I cannot find better words to say, other than I love this. :D

Freaky. O.o

So cool- I like your writing. :) Xigbar and Axel are both a little fucked up; I like them together. The part when Axel starts "crying" is especially good. I like how maybe it's roleplay, maybe it isn't, but either way it's a little disturbing... you definitely brought out their creepy sides. Hah. :p Really nice job on this!

It's horrible and fucked up and cool and smexy. I likes it a lot.

YAY! Xigbar x Axel! YAY FOR CRACK PAIRINGS!

This thing may have some kind of mental retardation, but it's some AWESOME kind of mental retardation. Seriously, why does your 'suckiest' writing still own all?

Barring the fact that when you've only got one eye you can't really double up vision anymore, it was really good. :) REALLY good.

UM. you blow my mind away xD

hide and seek is so much better with a gun

lots of love for this unique pairing

Wow! Impressive is the only word I can think of. Great oneshot. Disturbing oneshot. But amazingly written and just really damn well done. You may not know what's going on- none of us may know what's going on- but whatever it is, it's good. :O Can't say anything else but bravo.

...*gibbers incoherently*

i still love your writing. holy shit, i'm going to go curl up into a little ball and wish i had any talent at all.

LOVE,

archy

Pretty damn random. But it still shows a good take on what Xigbar and Axel's sexing time would be like. Heh I can't help but like Axel in this. Shows just how much of a cunning prick he is, which I love.

I also really like the style you wrote this in, very, very pretty.

Please write more son!