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Reviews for: Clarity
Ducky'sgirl4ever
2009-03-23 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
Obi the Kid
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
Excellent! Simple, yet emotional and meaningful. I think you captured Qui-Gon quite nicely. He's not always an easy character to get a grip on. Good work!
Got Scots
2006-08-19 . chapter 1
Aw this is so cute. Absolutely adorable! It completly captures the moment in that scene. I watched the Phantom Menace today for writing ideas and I was seriously thinking about doing this same moment, but from Obi-Wan's POV. ...Would that be okay?
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