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Reviews For: Intensity

Kristina K
2007-05-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it, I love it. I adore these short bursts of emotions, thick with angst. They make for the best stories with the most impact. The last line is almost always crucial and puts everything into a perspective. You did it so nicely.
CaptainK8
2007-02-11
ch 1,
abuseI truly love the way you wrote this. It has so few words but each sentence says volumes. You have made me think and understand. Great story :)
gigi2690
2007-01-31
ch 1,
abuseDeep Dark Powerful...brilliant
gigi
Darkmagic-luvr
2006-08-26
ch 1,
abuseaw, that's so pretty. i really like the confict between the two that you've portrayed here. it's really nice.

hmm, what to think of them?

-x-liv
Turtlebaby
2006-08-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it. I really really do!
mikachu
2006-08-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, I really liked this.

Not to sound really weird or anything, but I felt the intensity of this.

Great job.
Spokenvoice
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was SAD, i'm crying.
I know that its not easy... and you summed it up.
That was perfect!
Way to go! That was so emotional and so well written.
You're gonna give me more soon right? lol ... GREAT!
BEAUTIFUL
SidleMyIdol73
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseOH MY GOD! That drabble has left me speechless. It was so well written I could picture every word, every emotion in my mind. That's defintely going on my favourite stories list!

SidleMyIdol73.
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