I love it, I love it. I adore these short bursts of emotions, thick with angst. They make for the best stories with the most impact. The last line is almost always crucial and puts everything into a perspective. You did it so nicely.

I truly love the way you wrote this. It has so few words but each sentence says volumes. You have made me think and understand. Great story :)

Deep Dark Powerful...brilliant
gigi

aw, that's so pretty. i really like the confict between the two that you've portrayed here. it's really nice.

hmm, what to think of them?

-x-liv

I love it. I really really do!

Wow, I really liked this.

Not to sound really weird or anything, but I felt the intensity of this.

Great job.

That was SAD, i'm crying.
I know that its not easy... and you summed it up.
That was perfect!
Way to go! That was so emotional and so well written.
You're gonna give me more soon right? lol ... GREAT!
BEAUTIFUL

OH MY GOD! That drabble has left me speechless. It was so well written I could picture every word, every emotion in my mind. That's defintely going on my favourite stories list!

SidleMyIdol73.