hi

i really liked this story, very good characteristation but i think that alex would be slightly better in a fight than you made him. but that's just my opinion, i really did like the story though

Great story. I would love to see a sequel. What happens with the De-nai?

I. Loved. This story. :) I can't wait to read the sequel!

That was cool. Please do write the story of her meeting the parents. I really, really want you to.

PLEASE

pretty please write a sequel!I liked to see what happened to Alex.Would u write a squel?I''l check back later.

*pats you on the back, hands you a lollipop and a sign that says "congratulations! you're going on my favorites list!"*

I enjoyed this, it was well written and an interesting concept. Great job!

ok i am interested...would u please write the rest? i added u to my fav stories list b/c i really liked it

Awww. Ardeth's not mad at her, that's good! Can't wait for the next part! :)

Please Continue! I'm all excited to see what happens when they meet up with her father.

This gets better and better keep writing i want to find out what happens with Caitlin and Ardeth

I love this story. I was just saying before I started reading it that they should make a Mummy movie about Alex being grown up and still have atleast Jonathon in it. So anyway, Good job I am still very hooked on your story.

Great! Keep going!

I just wanna ask how you spell Ardeth's last name. Even the people who actually own the movie sometimes spell it 'Bey' and other times, 'Bay'. Just making a point.

Anyway, cool story. I like.

Lovely work, this. Add more soon!