I like this story, i want to see it.

Quite excellent

I LOVED this story it was FANTASTIC, hehehe, THANKS:"D

Foreman must be thinking I need to go on Vacation more often...LOL

I am so happy I was alone in the house when I read this, because the amount of coo-ing and aw-ing I did rivals what occurs when a *real* baby is in the house.
lol
Really, this was so sweet and awesome!
I can't think to give anything constructive, it was a great story. You just did it so wonderfully, from the crossover right to the birth and I enjoyed every word.
So thank you very much for writing, and I'll definitely be checking out your other works!

This is fabulous. I love how you managed to capture all the characters just right and every interaction was just perfect. Heh. Keep up the great writing.

Thanks for reviewing, Ravus! Yeah, "random" seems like a fair assessment LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

This has got to be one of the most random stories ever! i have never read male pregnant stories before but you made it belieable and fun! especially house and lex. really good job!

Aw... And yeah, the kid finally took after his heritage, not the daddy that gave him 'things'.

LOL, Loser_Wank! I think you must have accidentally put your review on the wrong story! There's no OC in this, and no twins -- you're mixing up your Harry Potter Mary-Sues with your House/Smallville mpregs!
:-D

This fic is absolutely fabulous.

This story…makes NO sense at all.


Your OC is very underdeveloped. She was just thrown in there for no reason. I don’t know who the hell is she, and why the twins are even fighting over her. Almost every chapter has sex in it and you know what, I really think that this is a sel-insert. There was no introduction of your OC, no history between her and the twins, or any character devolvement of you OC.

And please don’t pull the “don’t like, don’t read” bull. I like OC stories so I read them. Don’t pull the “it’s a fanfiction! I’ll do what I want!!” Then when you kill and rape the canon characters like YOU have, don’t bitch when people leave you flames or complain about your stories.

I’m sorry, I can tell this is your first story with an OC and if it’s not, I’d hate to see your first story.

Haha...different about the birth but still very good. Keep up the good work.

Can you please tell Lex that I helped with the baby too. That was an excellenting tying of loose ends (not that there were any) but it was more like dessert after the main course. Okay, no more metaphors. It was good. Aw,Clark hearing his baby is just so adorable. He is such a mom at heart. Lex experimenting on the baby is so Lex. I know he means well and there are things both parents need to know. Clark and Lex are so suited for each other. I loved the line about Clark being designed for motherhood. I think this is so true. What every mother wouldn't give to be faster than a speeding bullet when there child is about to take a tumble. Most are. Anyway, I'm rambling. Lovely fic. I really enjoyed it.

""What's wrong?" he gasped, and was a little proud that it didn't come out "Don't hurt me.""

HAH! Love it.