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Rhys
2008-08-30 . chapter 2
Col. I love the atmosphere.
Moar plz.
Anneka Neko
2008-08-11 . chapter 2
Ah, please do update! O.O They're really in character, and I can't wait to see what happens. xD
AquaousExtract
2008-01-21 . chapter 2
Whoa! Didn't know Riku could be so...I dunno...Grr-like! Axel really likes it rough doesn't he? Please continue! I lurv this story!!
Lady-Rikus
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
Hi, umm i really like your CLM, and i was just wondering if you were ever going to update and put a new chapter up? and im really sorry if this seems rude, but i would really appreciate it. well thank you.
akatsuki-NIN-itachi
2007-05-10 . chapter 2
OMG! Update soon please! It's good, I like it!
Lady-Rikus
2007-04-15 . chapter 2
I love it! You need to write another chapter. I just can't wait to see what happens next
herzeleidx
2007-02-24 . chapter 2
lolzupdate.
ah this is wonderful.
ChibiFrubaGirl
2007-01-26 . chapter 2
Yeah yeah... You SAY you'll update if we review but you won't will you?
I bet you've left this site too...
That really sucks you know.
Oh well... If you even get this message then I guess I should say good bye! If you ever return to write more fanfictions I'll review!
This story is awesome by the way! It's definetly new to see Riku on top of Axel... Oh the possibilities... Hm...
Good bye
-Chibifrubagirl
vomite
2007-01-06 . chapter 2
Love it.So realistic, I love your writing style.
FREAKSHOW1
2007-01-06 . chapter 2
Ooh, I like this one. It's disturbing enough to grab my attention, and keep it.
Machina Maw
2006-12-30 . chapter 2
I didn't think much of the summary, but I'm glad I read this. Great writing, great plot development thus far. Keep it up.
Freyja Vanadis
2006-11-15 . chapter 2
Wow, I like this. I thought of Hey Arnold too HAH! (and whoever reviewed with the feffirof song is god.)
But anyways, yeah, this is interesting. I'm liking it a lot! Can't wait for Axel to call...!!
Kyrene once Blood Roses
2006-11-01 . chapter 2
...I totally thought of Hey Arnold! when you explained his room. And right on to Riku! Right on to screwing Riku! Right on to Riku screwing you! Ahem, I love how your writing this, it's kinda reminding me of some of my favorite books. Keep Going!!
jaques-lefrou
2006-10-31 . chapter 2
interesting. i'd like to see how this unfolds. keep writing
Rosalyn Angel
2006-10-30 . chapter 2
YAY UPDATE! I'm already loving it. How do you do drugged-up scenes so /well/?

I'm totally loving the fact that you made Leon and Marluxia twins. Oh god, the possibilities. "Axel thinks one of them might be straight." I'm so amused that he can't tell which. XDXD And Larxene and her knives and notes... LOL.

I love the way you kept describing Lexaeus. He's so fun and... big. And he talked in 2-3 word sentences. I don't know why that makes me giggle. Just... so blunt.

YES, Axel! Call the number! There needs to be some conversation. Some awkward conversation, but conversation nevertheless!

So... short! Why was it so short? BiZ, it was too short! Don't make us wait so long. D: Especially now that you decided to continue it. *heart*

-RA, out
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