pms its good

Wow, loved it! Very well written and believable. Congrats!

I loved it. it was a very well-written Oneshot.

omg.. this is a good chap.. mayb it could use a lil dialoge but i like the narration... r gon write anoda 1 u should

great job on this. i love spashley. very well written.

My favorite paragraph was: Every time we hugged, it was like a string was tugging at my heart, trying to rip it straight through my chest. Because being that close to her, but being so far away at the same time, was horrible. I could wrap my arms around her in a completely friendly way, but I wanted to kiss her, to hold her hand, and even lay her down and make love to her. Just looking at her tempted me.

idk why i liked that one the best...so far...

"i found some kind of excuse to see her everyday but it wasn't enough"

"I told her that i liked girls but she completely ignored it"

"I loved her and she couldn't see it" well not LOVE. lol

"I waited for her to catch on to my hints and I waited for her to like me back. It didn't happen so I became bitter towards her."

"The only way to get rid of a temptation is to yield to it" I like that quote, assuming its that quote challenge from ur community thing.

That last line was a strange ending lol basically cuz it sounds liek something you'd say. about the mental note lol. But...by far the best story you've written so far in my opinion..that i've read lol...it's my favorite. I wanna buy the South Of Nowhere DVD's dammit...hope they come out sometime soon!!

Awesome story.
I wish I could give into my temptation like that.
But it's soo scary.
Lol.
You're a good writer.
Keep it up.

amazingly good!

awsome!!

Oh my god...Has anyone ever told you that you are a brilliant person? Seriously, I think I love you. This is great, I would love to read one from Ashley's point of view.

whoa amaszing. I love it