This is so chilling . . .
You write Seishirou very, very, very well.

okay. this is in need of an M title

OMG! SEISHIRO YOU BASTARD! *sob*

he was so evil, so cruel, and you could see that he was SEISHIRO. It made me really hate him. I'm a devout Christian, so this was really hard for me to read... but I hated and loved this fic at the same time. I love it cause it's so well written and gives such insight into him, And hated him because of the horror and cruelty it gave insight to

Wow, that was so good. Very dark and gory and yet beautifully written. You captured Sei-chan's ruthless and careless attitude perfectly. Good job!

Okay... ew.

I loved it! As usual. Seishirou is very well portrayed - you really got under his skin and made him walk and talk and think and "hope" . I also loved the detail in this story - the description of sensations - smells, sights, sounds... It made me really feel as if I were there.

I'm not sure if the Sakurazukamori is into mass murdering xD but the touch of making the victims church-goers was very nice. It's true that you bashed up belief in God quite a bit, but this IS Seishirou we're talking about, after all. For some reason this reminds me of that time in the anime when Seishirou is looking at the church where Karen is fighting the shiki (even though there's really no link xD) but anyways... off-subject.

Basically... you did it again! *wink* A very chilling horror story that I much appreciated. There's only one tiny, eensy, smallish detail that doesn't work simply for cultural reasons but it doesn't really matter, it's easily overlooked - in Japan, the coming of age is at 21, not 18. But it's ok, as I said, it's easily overlooked :) Much love, dear. I loved this one.