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Reviews for: Two Rockets Walk into a Bar
Prince Izzy X 8/31/06 . chapter 1
*Chuckles* Awesome story! It's not often you get to see things from the eyes of an average person in the Pokémon world other than the kid with the yellow rat. This was quite the amusing read, not to mention it was set in a place and situation your NEVER see on the animé or the games. Good show!

I loved the reference to "those guys with the Meowth," as well as the usage of the ol' motto! XD

...Although, I would think every pair of Rockets gets their own motto. Ya know, like how Butch and Cassidy have a motto different from Jessie and James'. Not that it's a bad thing, of course. It's hard to make up a motto, especially one that rhymes! X_X Just it would've been better if Joe and Harry had a motto to call their own.

Great fic though! Congrats!
Dybael 8/30/06 . chapter 1
Those damn decimals will get you every time.

Seriously, Sarge, this is great.
Teioh 8/26/06 . chapter 1
It was pretty good. I think that most of those arguments from the last review are trivial, as if they were changed it would change the story from good into bleh. Keep it up. I like it.
Aenlic 8/19/06 . chapter 1
I don't believe that Team Rocket members would be fired - first thing, company policies are secrets, and traitors, well, traitors can feed the police information.

One thing that stuck out was the fact that Joe was the least favourite Rocket. I believe the anime portrayed Jessie and James as those, however.

Even if this is a parody, there are certain things to stick to. For one, Vulpix not Vulpex.

[“To protect the world from devastation.”

Nothing. Harry put on a smile and shook his fist. “To protect the world from devastation!”]

The above could work better as one entire paragraph, or it gets confusing as to who is speaking.

And Giovanni in a bar? Highly unlikely.

It's a parody, but still.
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