so sad

o.O ...
YOU KILLED RIZA!! -jawdrops-

anyway ... great story ... could be a little be length-y though XD

- looks at date - whoa ... lol

Thanks so much guys! You won't believe how much your reviews mean to me! ^^

actually, this is the 1st time I'm getting reviews... hehe...

poor roy.

Aww, sadness. Poor Riza, and Roy.

Omgoodness! Please write on! I want to know what happens next!

.l. damn u. shouldn even have da ying ni. never ever ask me review ur story again n NEVER EVER REVIEW MINE! UR REVIEW IS ALWAYS NEGATIVE!

aw...that's so sad. and true, too.
and awsome. i like it dude!

'please, keep writing!'