Awesome!! Not really M-rated though.

You really do write these guys well, I'm liking it. :)

This is looking really good. Look forward to reading more! :)

I like your characterisation.

Words cannot express how amazing this was. The style, the humor the dialogue... This could easily been a discworld book and done the series more than justice. I am in awe. Suffice it to say that should you ever decide to stop writing, i feel that the World would be a less beautiful place.

Subtle, interesting, suitable dark/humour mix, lovely work! Thanks!

"A few days later, a bathtub happened. There was a Polly in it, and the Polly was delighted."

You. I. That must be the most amazing chapter beginning ever.

And, of course, there was the fic as a whole. 1) It is the only MR fic I have ever read and really, really loved. 2) Polly the Vampire wins at life. Even more so than Pollyanna of the shiny teeth and trousers. 3) The writing is gorgeous. Gorgeous, I tell you.

So, yes. Fav'd, among other things.

One of the best fanfics I've read, possibly ever, I'm actually considering begining writing again.

Unshakable proof that there are small corners of this site left wit real talent in the wake of the cringe worthy stuff.

Rejoice, for all is not lost!

(seriously it's an excellent story people, a definite MUST read)

Ah.. that's sweet. Can you wright a second story along these lines?

Your first chapters are confusing and made my head spin for a bit but your writing style reminds me of a hybrid of Pratchett and The Shoebox Project and the plotline you have is utterly killer. This fic makes me glad I returned to ficnet after swearing it off for about a year out of mourning for the state of fanfiction, as it were. Thank you.

I'm really sad to see it end :( I wanted to read more and more. Then again, I guess it makes to stop it at some point. I just hope that you will write more stories for me to read :)

Its over. Too bad. :`-(
Still I can see that going on would be no sense.
So I just hope youre going to have a new story up soon.
Cause this is one of the best I ever read.
Youre writing styly is amazing, really.
And the quick updates were an extra bonus. :-)
Just wanted to mention that, cause it made me, as a hungry reader, very happy to see new chapters up so regularyly (is that a word? looks strange.)

So... is there somthing going on with Mal and Otto? I'm a little confused on that point. The fluff at the end is so adorable.

Oh no! Poor Mal!

Seriously, I've been on the edge of my seat throughout this story, and I can't wait for the next part!

...oh shit. That's quite a letdown right there, after all those chapters... Poor Maladict. Poor Polly. I really hope she's just hallucinating...

Your story is very good. It's well written, has a plot (Even if I was quite confused in the beginning), is funny. It has a bit of all in the right proportions.

Your story deserves way more reviews!

I've been reading it for some time now, but have been to lazy to review. Sorry for that.

Um, I dunno what to write. Have fun, write more?