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Rutheart
2008-07-21
ch 31,
abuseI've been reading dozens of Stargate fanfics this last week, and I have to say that your's was the most pleasurable to read and the most well-written of them all. If I had paid money to read this story, I would not have been disappointed. If you ever find the time in your hectic life (judging from the A/Ns), I'd urge you to seek a publisher for your work.
Ruth
daflippnay
2008-07-10
ch 31,
abuseThis story was so exciting that I sometimes found myself reading ahead and then having to reread everything that I skimmed over in the hopes that I didn't miss anything. It could just be my ADD, though, hah.

Truly wonderful stuff you've got here, and it read like a novel, too. I'll be on the lookout for more of your works.
Devilish Me
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story! Loved it! :)
E
2008-06-03
ch 31, anon.
abuseOne of the best fics I've read. It took couple of days to read it. And kinda sad that it's over. Loved those cliffhangers and twists. End was a bit too fluffy for me, but overall a great (!) story.
Celwen
2008-03-11
ch 31,
abuseWell, my eyes are burning, because I've just read it all at once...Wonderful! I like it so much! You're a very good writer! Thank you very much for sharing it! Hope my Ebglish is good, I'm Italian...
thetamarine
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abusehaha "potatoehead" love it!
SG1SJSGAEJ
2008-02-22
ch 31,
abuseI LOVED IT! One of my favourite stories. I think I read about 10 chapters tonight and loved everyone of them. I have to admit though, that I just about died of laugther a half a dozen times in the last two chapters. They were priceless (as I'm sure the looks on everyone's faces would have been). I really liked this story. Thanks for the great read.

PS: A sequal with Ba'al and his desire for revenge against the Tau'ri??
SG1SJSGAEJ
2008-02-22
ch 25,
abuseI know that I can just hit the next button and get more story, but at this point you are PURE EVIL. Good cliffhanger as much as I hate them.
Lady Spezz
2008-02-16
ch 31,
abuseWhat an awesome story. You're such a fantastic writer!
Thanks so much for the read.
RedHeadReader
2008-02-13
ch 31,
abuseOMG! you are fantastic!! i love this and cant wait toread the rest of your stuff, i am so adding this to fave storiesand u to authoers. u balance fluff ( of which i am a HUGE fan sappy romantic here ;p) and humour. and everyone is in character. ok, sam was a lil ooc but sinice its been a while since ive watched SG (im ammasing a colliection of sg1 and atlantis) ill let it slide cuz its probs me lol. jack was spot on, well wel done.
RHR
Odakota-Rose
2008-02-04
ch 31,
abuse*grin* I finally got to read the last couple chapters of this that I'd missed over the past few months.
Wonderful! I love that they finally got their happy ending. And uh, the last part. HEHE. I highly doubt they'll be complaining about the 'residual effects' anytime soon. Or at all ;)
MiaRose 156
2008-02-01
ch 31,
abuseLoved the ending.
chocolatequeen
2008-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm sure I already reviewed this once, and I probably said the same thing then, but reading your author's note at the beginning just makes me laugh. "and I mean the ones with the red covers, not the pansy, edited for content variety…" It's such an apt description, and for someone who works in a library, it's one I live with daily.

Oh, and now that I've read the whole story (multiple times), I can say with some authority that you could probably write one of those red-covered novels, if you wanted too. ;)
Windrider
2008-01-24
ch 31, anon.
abuseNot a problem. It was definitely worth hanging in for the end. Thanks so much for a wonderful story! :)
Bixata
2008-01-13
ch 31,
abuseLoved it, absolutely loved the whole story, especially the epilogue. You had me laughing along with them. I'm looking forward to more of your stories, keep 'em coming. Thanks for a brilliant piece of work.
-Bixata
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