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xPeaceful Blissx
2009-12-05 . chapter 4
This chapter is just...there not enough words to conjure up that really describes what i feel about this one. Its just so fantastic that my squeels were heard all down my street and throughout my neighborhood. =__= But I definately loved the preist in this chapter for sure, he knew about the religious struggle decision, but let Sasuke choose for himself, and told him to go for it. YAY! Ha, its nice to see a girly scared Sasuke once in a while, throught a story, its pretty comical to see really. OHMAHGEEBUS!Lemon -drools;; that just speaks for itself. Its wonderfully written, and I aplaud you once more for it being so awesome. Aw, the ending was so cute. and I can't wait to see some more from you again!! :D

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xPeaceful Blissx
2009-12-05 . chapter 3
M lime scene, yummy. xD I had a field day with this chapter, plus it was your first attempt and I congradulate you! Its wonderful, just fantastic. Haha, Naruto's Q & A with Sasuke, glad they got their feelings out. Its cute and a wee bit of fluff for the confession parts, but the fantasy babble you made Naruto have was completely awesome! Love it, truely do.

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xPeaceful Blissx
2009-12-05 . chapter 2
Ahaha, Sakura telling Naruto to blow him at work. Hilarious. Ooh~ Naruto's mind is on a roll their, interesting. LOL!! "Oh, I was just fantasizing about deep-throating you in your cubicle…that didn’t sound like it would work. How about, I was wondering if you’d ever consent to having me suck you off at work?" Genius, I swear! I said it out-loud and my mom looked at me like I was stupid or something. Definately loved this chapter, showed what little Naruto has for Sasu also.

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xPeaceful Blissx
2009-12-05 . chapter 1
Ah~ the faith of religion that comes inbetween the thought of rightness, or happiness. Its a conflict that happens to many many people. But, im definately loving how your torturing Sasuke by having Naruto right next to him. Haha, I loved the line "What in Hell? Am I getting menopause or something? I'm a man. I'm not supposed to have hot flashes..." had me rolling. :D Amazing author, fantastic story.

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Ai Enmaxjigoku shoujo
2009-07-23 . chapter 4
Oh~ I loved this... you know, I've come to realize that when there are stories like this, if it has four chapters it's awesome! Seriously, I've read plenty of awesome SasuNaru's like this by different people on different sights, and the best ones for some reason all had four chapters... it's awesomely weird!
Sayu91
2009-06-07 . chapter 4
WOW
You're good *.*
I liked Sasukes Character, i think thats the first time for me to see a catholic Sasuke ... but its cool =)
You did a good Job, i liked the Lemon /<
Good Job ;D
Chikari
2009-05-18 . chapter 4
that.. was hot lol good job
Zenerific1
2009-05-12 . chapter 4
Not Hentai! YAOI, Awesome job, loved the whole angsty scenes that Sasuke went through, then the hot little lime in the elevator and a full on scorching lemon! YES, loved it. And you did a really goo job writing it to! Thank you for sharing
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2009-05-04 . chapter 4
Nice story!
Anihihi
2009-04-04 . chapter 1
I think Sasuke needs more than beer:p
brighteye20
2009-03-22 . chapter 4
hey, just wanted to commend you on your lemon!! it was actually one of the best I've read in awhile!! Loved the story!
LovelyCookie
2009-02-01 . chapter 4
That was very cute, although religion never makes me feel comfortable. Two thumbs up!
Jean Anderson
2008-09-03 . chapter 4
sasuke was such a prude yet it was naruto who was such an uke. lol. that was hot. religion and sex, you couldn't write it better than this if you tried. lol! that was really good. and sasuke's obsession with religion kind of translates to his obsession in the series/manga. you gotta give it to him, he's got a one-track mind. well, that is until something like naruto comes in the way! ;p

very interesting read indeed!
unknown profile
2008-08-15 . chapter 4
Really awesome story! I had so much fun reading this!
yaoi loveing wolf
2008-07-23 . chapter 4
that was hott!
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