Thanks for writing so much Sirius Regulus brother stories. I really liked it. You're an excellent writer. My only critique is that I think the Hog's Head would be a better setting.

I liked it! Well-written, nice dynamic between those two.

Wow, I really hope you are planning to continue this story through Regulus's death. I would be very interested in reading your take on that.

Otherwise you've done a very good job here. I really like how you wrote the relationship between Regulus and Sirius. You can tell they are brothers by the way they interact with each other.

Nicely done.

Oh. . . . *sighs* Poor Reg, not least because he's probably right. It is too late for him to get out with his life.

Anyway, I love their relationship the way you've portrayed it, especially in the second flashback in paranthesis. (I also kind of like that approach to shrot flashback; it works so well and manages not to be irritating on the page . . . I may have to try it sometime. . . .) Anyway, it just seems, well, REAL, how Regulus is determined to hate Sirius (but not really doing that good a job of it) and Sirius is determined NOT to hate Reg (although Reg doesn't actually believe that's true).

So, Sirius is perfectly in character and there is nothing to nitpick at, so kudos for that. Hmm . . . This is the third excellent Regulus one shot I've read from you, isn't it? *adds you to favorites as a reminder to keep an eye out for more*

Anyway, excellent story!

Cheers!

well, just: wow.

I've never read anything in which you actually see Regulus and Sirius together, talking almost as if their family might be normal. I loved this! I've never seen Sirius being brotherly and you deserve applause for something this original! Great Job!