Congratulations, you've managed to simultaneously tear out a piece of my heart and make me snort water out of my nose; it felt a little like burping and sneezing at the same time.

This story was fabulous, but it made my chest ache. You're really that good.

(Note: The part with Blind Io - pure gold.)

Really very good. Well written in style. Romantic and sexy, with the hot bits left to the imagination. Good ideas too.

OMW o_o I actually read this before, a long time ago... but it took me until I was nearly half-way through to realize it. Sure, the beginning was lovely and amusing and perhaps a bit closer to Mr. Pratchett's style than the rest - but it was the rest that stuck in my memory. This singularly intense portrayal of what has incidentally gone on to become my Discworld slash OTP must've stuck in my mind for at least a year - be proud :) I even remembered the bit with poor disappointed Blind Io ;o Though there were some bits that were maybe a little *too* sappy/dramatic (i.e. when Leonard is pleading with Vetinari to be quick about killing him), in its own strange way it worked. It's all so emotional... This fic is one-of-a-kind and I love it ^^

Honestly, it had to be you writing that to make it work. Leonard...and Vetinari? Woa! And you still made it work. I think my mind just turned into mush and wandered out of my ears to find a nice, quiet corner to cry. And the part that makes me a freak has red hands from all the cheering and jumping up and down and clapping and so on.
Holy... **!
loved it!

i nearly died of laughter when i read the part about blind io
very good

Bizarre pairing, but you manage to make it seem vaguely plausible. *tips hat*

Wow. Wonderfully written - the first part mirrored PTerry's style very closely, while you've done a credible job of making the OOC affair plausible.

An unexpected, if...fitting pairing - after all, genius deserves genius. However, Vetinari is mine (at least in the confines of my own head.). Your story has been added to the C2: Veni, Vidi, Vetinari. Well done!

This one's very good too! I liked the part where the dude called him an attack flamingo. And the part where Leonard was scared...it was so sad, and moving. Really good.

i like how you've captured Vetinari. its pretty accurate, but Leonard is another matter. where do you get off writing him as a drama queen? Leonard is impulsive and not just a little hyperactive, he's not the type of person to linger on one thing for too long. i don't have any problem with the slash, but the setting is so reminiscent of most current HP/SS slash in the Harry Potter section. the stoic one has to care for the invalid...bleh

lol... Good. Really good! PLZ WRITE MORE X3!

This was...not what I was expecting. But I liked it. Contrary to the other reviewers, I wasn't as impressed at the start, as I felt that too much of it was lifted from the books (I grant you Vetinari is probably the hardest character to write). But I liked the pairing, it made sense, the only bit that jarred was the actual consummation bit - but then I have always imagined Vetinari as a rather slow, restrained lover, not the bouncy type. Not that I've imagined it at all. No. Not me.

Fun! You actually got some humor into this one!
Humor is good. I try to use some humor in my fics, too. Of course, humor is nearly impossible to avoid when writing about PTerry novels, anyway. And slash is excellent too. I congratulate you, you silly slash goddess!

I don't have anything inteligent ot say, but :)

Well done. Fairly well characterized. You got Vetinari pretty well. Not too sure about Leonard, but 'sokay, I haven't read too much of him. The slashiness was very good, and very well-written. I'd like very much to give you a hug. *hugs* There, there ya go!

All right...I'll admit, I sniggered a little. I'm immature. I think you'll get the gist of what I mean. I didn't mean to...*sighs* I wish my muses would come back so they could properly thwonk me on the head for that...

Yikes. Just, yikes.
Why is it some people have all the luck? I wish I were as good a slash writer as you are. Sigh.
Thanks for writing this story....I so love your work!
Be peachy, dear, and look forward to the next Pratchett book coming out in November!