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| Plainred 2007-05-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMG... if that happened to me... How I wish *sighs wistfully* But don't all of us? ke ke ke XD Great chappie, embodying the hopes of the fantasizing fangirl!^^ Keep up the good work :] |
| omasuoniwabanshi 2006-12-19 ch 3,  | abuseOh that was just too funny. Mako switching her crush from Kurama to Hiei, and mistaking him for a little kid, had me rolling. No wonder Hiei was backing away slowly, hand on sword hilt! Nice send-up of fangirls. |
| Armed'n'Strangerous 2006-08-24 ch 3, | abuseMe again. I liked the new chappie. ^^' |
| Phireofthedark 2006-08-24 ch 3, anon. | abuselol the whole thing was funny! try to make it a bit longer.. i was a bit surprised at how short it was.. unless you want it to be like that.. but add in some more detail.. otherwise, keep up the good work ^_^ two thumbs up! *biggrin* |
| crazykitsune17 2006-08-24 ch 3, | abuse*shakes head* What the hell...? I was wondering for the longest time what in the world this had to do with the rest of the story, but I get now that it was just a short thing for fun. ^^; Interesting... Before I looked at the picture you linked for us, I was having the world's hardest time picturing Kurama and Hiei in military gear... Anyway, that was funny how the girl thought that Hiei was a kid... *snerk* Cute. I had a little trouble following what was going on, though. But I think that if I read through it again I'd get a better picture. *~*~*crazykitsune17*~*~* |
| Plainred 2006-08-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like your story...I really wish the second chapter had more though...Please...continue...? |
| crazykitsune17 2006-08-23 ch 2, | abuse*grumbles* I don't normally read SI fics... but lately I've kind of been looking for a good OC/SI fic... I think this is it. VERY intriguing writing. I am grumbling because I want to know what happens. >_< I loved that first chapter. "Maybe you should electrify her with your beauty..." - hahaha. It kind of seemed as if the Yu Yu characters were making fun of the vast majority of superfluous Mary-Sue fics... ^^; Hmm anyway, please continue with this! I believe that I like it. =) *~*~*crazykitsune17*~*~* |
| Armed'n'Strangerous 2006-08-23 ch 2, | abuseKnow the feeling with not knowing where your going with a fiction. ^^' But, anyways, Your doing good so far; keep it up! lol. ^^' |
| Aiieke 2006-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuse“No, no! Stay with me, Minagawa-san!” Genius! xD |
| Armed'n'Strangerous 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseI like. Well written and funny! ^^' That's a Good combo. lol. |
| Inikus 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseThat is probably what would happen to me if I looked into that fox's eyes! And probably a thousand other girls. *sigh* and it feels like I should be the only one! Great story, so much more likeable than a stoopid romance. I can only ever like OCs if they share with me the same patheticness. Our shared weakness: obsession with Minamino Shuuichi. Wouldn't mind reading a series of stories like this, if you have time :D |
| SXB 2006-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseBRILLIANCE. |