That was so very lovely :). Great Story!

First of all, please don't take my criticism as cruel or intentionally rude and/or mean. I thank you for your review.

I can't say that this was a good story, because it wasn't, and I refuse to lie in my reviews. First of all, you never, ever...EVER write a story in first person present tense unless you plan to confuse both yourself and whatever reads your story. (You made my head explode with your wording)

Now that we have that out of the way, you use pronouns so much that you make J.K. Rowling cry with your lack of sensitivity to the characters. You don't use the character's personalities to the right extent. As a matter of fact, you make them seem as if they were your own characters that can do whatever they want. Well, they can't.

DieHart

Now that is just to damn cute.

I was afraid that Draco would say no to him at first!

*squees* Ahh...the fluff.

And the ending was just perfect.

YAY! happy ending! update soon!

xx rach xx

too cute for words!

THIS WAS AMAZING. please, keep them coming

i loved this little one shot!

very cute! I liked it a lot!

aww! so squishy sweet! I like it muchly :)