Yolie suddenly stood up. “I have an announcement to make!” she said happily.

“You’re pregnant!” Davis blurted out.

Ken began to choke on the orange juice he was drinking.

X

“Hey Davis, look! A tree!”

“Wow Tai, I never saw one of those before!”

“I know! Good thing Yolie brought us all the way out here! We would’ve missed out on that beauty!”

X

"Hey Tai, look! A rock!”

“Wow Davis! A rock!”

X

ah . . . good times. God , guess what? Tk's adorable. and so is izzy. and joe. YOU MAKE EVERYONE SO FIRGGIN' LOVABLE! . . . well, except for Cody. He has been eaten by the backround.

I WANNA READ THE ALTERNATE ENDING!

i thought it flowed fine. not as much as the previous chapter, but it wasn't all . . . chunky.

I LOVE THE SQUIRRELS! Squirrels are mad awesome beings. Almost as awesome as link.

OMIGOD! Joe and Mimi are SO CUTE! they're totally my favorite characters. They have to get married. or something. do it. or i'll beat you up.

the matt-tai-sora love triangle is getting INTENSE. well, i mean, not especially in this chapter, but in the other chapters (as i was rereading, since it's been so long i FORGOT). Intense . . . it's like . . . an intense thing. OH! Burn! wait . . . not really.

_ I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

Hm... the plot... well, not so much as "thickens" as "starts to exist".

The little "Queen Kari" bit should lead to a good adventure of sorts...

I can totally empathize with Izzy at the lakeside...

More pranks... good times.

Oh, and please PM me with the "Alternate Ending" thing. I'm sure it's funny. (Like the rest of your writings)

Please update soon!

YOu updated

YEA YEA YEA

Okay

I think it's amazing so far

I love it how Davis is like Kari's puppy, that's what he reminded me of

I feel bad for Tai, his life sucks, but doesnt it always

Matt deserves to Die

And Sora well I want to strangle her

mimi is so cute

and well no one else was mentioned

except for TK who is also so cute,

this is in Kari's POV? I was a little confused becasue I thought it was but I'm not sure

And Sora is on the right track she should Die

Izzy should tell her taht too not say no dont die he should say "DIE SORA DIE"

Poor Mimi, the little thingy was in hte shower, poor Mimi

Also who drinks Hot Choclate in the summer

Strange people

And Joe just tell Mimi you are despratly in love with her and you want to be with her forever and Chris was a jerk...

Boys so slow,

you see none of this would have happen if it wasnt for Matt

and I thougth Matt was smarter you put the food in the box this almost sounds like a Tai plan,

And it's Day two i just wanted to point out because the other day is day one and then their would be two day ones and well you get it

Your story was amazing so i wrote you a super long long review update faster or I might cry and go into a deep deppression

SO UPDATE

LOVE IT!UPDATE SOON!

Wha- you updated? Cool. I almost forgot what this story was about... then I looked at the summary, and it all came back to me... thanks for continuing it.

Very funny chapter. You tied everything together so well! I love stories that do that. Only thing I have to say is that I think you left out a time break when they were setting the trap for the squirrel. Other than that, nothing.

Please update soon!

(aka Bla) just so you dont go yell at someone else thinking their me, plus offically i decided that you need to make a move on this story, i your going to slow, and boring me, plus you need to get to the main part were Tai and Sora fall desperatly in love, for ever and ever and ever (I know i promised i would stop bugging you but you need to update) so all you need to work on is Matt, just make up a girl, someone like Tai, sporty, nice, shy, doesnt want to fall in love, and independent, very important, Matt doesnt want someone who is all over him more like someone who is strong and independent and dead set against having a boyfriend to make it all funny he he, and really i should be telling you how wonderful your story is. but (looky a period) its horrible horrible because you are ripping Tais heart into little bitty peieces, (but I know whats going to happen Ha ha to all other readers) but still I shat cry cry and cry and fall fall fall through to the floor, dying dying. So missy this is my dying wish, Have

1. Tai and SOra fall in love get married be old happy and die together

2. Find a romanitc partner for Matt like the girl i described above, and name her Sam (short for Samantha) becase Matts short for Yamat or something like that also it would describe her perfectly, and make her a red head, becasue if i wasnt blond thats what i would want to be

3. TK and Kari forever

But have fun writing remeber to update more often the suspense is killin me. and now off Ta ta, maybe i will right a fic, make tai and sora fall in love, joe and mimi and Tk and Kari, oh and Ken and Yolie cant forget about them, and Izzy and his labtop, theres definenlty something their.

Have a wonderflu life, update (both your stories) have fun and email me

Your story is still amazing even though i hate it

ME

I loved this. I really hope Tai doesn't get too angry, lol. Lookin forward to reading more soon!

It is pretty good.

hm...this is a very interesting story you have here...update soon!

Its me again! I am giving you a review

#1 Sora is in love with Tai not Matt

plus Matt could find a girlfriend in like 10 seconds it takes Tai forever to because his brain is so much smaller!

but other than that It was an amazing story

cant wait untill you add more

The excellence of this story is amazing!

Keep it up! You've really captured their personalities!

LOL. I like this. Please update!

Stained In Negativity

LOVE IT!UPDATE SOON!