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| Fredryck 2006-08-25 ch 1,  | abuseYes! You began another fic, this is good. And I like the beginning, I've rarely seen Hiroshi as a main character even if he's great. Now just add some C/A and this will become perfect! ;) Added to favorites. |
| RanMouri82 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOh! This was so cute, and a refreshing premise! Sadly, "Agasa's First Love" is one of the few cases I've not read yet, but this does seem completely in character; best of all was Ai's disarming nature. Please keep writing this! |
| TotoroChibi 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseAh, what an interesting plot. I love it. x] Can't wait for more! |
| Claude le noctambule 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseDrabble about the Hiroshi family...Well, you've catch my interest... And it's the first time I see someone write about Fusae, not that it's bad, in the contrary... This first drabble was...Well, sweet but clasical...But it was sweet enough to make me waiting for the other...^^ |
| Mizuki Ai 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseWell that was certainly... nice. I really like the idea and I was wondering is Fusae going to learn about "Ai-chan"? |
| SN 1987A 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseAww. Aww! ...Wish I could say something more intelligent. :P And I just noticed you posted this on LJ. XD Sometimes I feel like just giving up on FFnet and post reviews on LJ, since all the fics I read are mainly posted on LJ anyway. So it's a series of drabbles? I love your drabbles. (Was going to tell you to write more.) The characterizations of all three are great. Will be waiting for the rest of the drabbles, and hopefully, we don't have to wait for a year. XD |
| Eeveebeth Fejvu 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseFinally someone decides to write about Hiroshi, Fusae, and Ai as a family! I've thought they'd make a great family ever since I read the "Agasa's First Love" case, so congratulations! I like the way you are writing their characters; totally non-OCC. I can't wait to see more of their interactions, both Hiroshi & Fusae and Ai & Fusae (it makes me wonder what would happen if someday much later Fusae found out that Ai is really a ten-year-older Shiho). I hope that you keep this story going, and that you update very soon! I'll be watching for it! ~Eevee-chan |