Beautiful. I can see this happening perfectly. Oh! And your timeline is right on. Great work!

Very good! Very, very, very good! Great job!

aw, i liked it. thats one of my favorite episdoes! did they ever say... how flash died? I cant remember. I'll go watch the episdoe again but... i dont remember them saying a thing about it.

Yes, it was accurate. Great job!

Very Good! I hope you continue this, or write another one soon.

Aww thats sad. I like your interatation, and ya I know I didn't spell that right.

Hey, nice story. It flowed together really well. Keep it up.

Very nice, I really liked it. And yes, it did seem accurate. Again, very nice.

wow, deep...

I really enjoyed watching "A Better World" so I was wondering if you had it on your computer and if you didn't can you tell me the site? just email it to me, my email is a yahoo account, my name here is my yahoo name only there it's all lowercase.

If you could please send me a link or something i'd worship you.

Back on topic, I really enjoyed it. I'm kinda outta it so that's all i can really think of.

This rox my sox.

Oh, this hurts in a good way.

Very nice!

oh... that was one of the best stories that I have read in a long time. Absolutely fabulous! Keep up the good work!

Excellent! You said so much in such a short story. Again, excellent.

Very nice.

After watching 'A Better World' recently, I've also been intruiged by Lorder Batman's attachment to the Flash - it's almost as if he blames himself for the death. And yes, Flash's death is supposed to come before Luthor's; it's one of the things that pushes Superman to do it. It also explains Batman's cold 'It had to be done' at the beginning of the episode.

Anyway, very much enjoying this story - I wonder if we'll see anything of Alfred? I can't believe he would approve of the Justice Lords in any form.