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| dares to dream 2008-07-09 ch 24, | abuseok. first of all. LOVED IT! and second of all... are you Carolyne Keene's daughter or something cause these stories are absolutley amazing! If i wasnt looking at a computer screen i would swear i was reading a book! If you havent published anything yet you should definitly look into writing some mysteries because it is definitly a strong point! +dares to dream+ |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-20 ch 22, anon. | abuseWell, when I read the Nancy Drew classics, mostly all of the chapters end in cliffhangers. |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-20 ch 19, anon. | abuseYou are evil! |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-20 ch 11, anon. | abuseI like to read the old and classic Nancy Drew books. But when I started reading Nancy Drew, I only read the... the... Nancy Drew Files! Did you know that in Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys Supermystery # 25 (Secrets of the Nile) Frank and Nancy kiss! I really want to read that book! |
| Alyson Drew 2008-05-20 ch 11, anon. | abuseI really like your stories. I know it is 2 yrs. after, but I think you will be the next Carolyn Keene. Are you planning on becoming an author, because if you are. I would make sure that I read all your mystery books. |
| bookworm2009 2008-04-24 ch 24, | abusei liked it |
| bookworm2009 2008-04-23 ch 2, | abuseCarson is right...nancy can pull through anything...i mean...look at how much she's already been through |
| Azn Shortii 2007-06-10 ch 24, | abuseGreat Story!! I loved the ending, although I'm a bit sad Paul had to die..oh well, some things just has to happen. Keep Writing! |
| DementedLeaf 2007-03-19 ch 24, | abuseAh. Nice story... I decided to read it all then review at the end, as I wasn't too keen on reviewing all 24 chapters. What to say? Very few spelling errors, good grammar - I don't really have anything to complain about. You've paced the story well, so it doesn't all happen at once - in some stories, I've seen events happen in two chapters, when they should've had at least 8. Hm, what else. Good storyline, amusing characters... I shall have to check to see what else you've written now :-) |
| katie janeway 2007-02-15 ch 24, | abuse;) Since when have Nan and the boys ever really been able to have a vacation? Lol. Steph, congrats on finishing another wonderful fic. You keep getting better and better, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what else you might come up with in the future. |
| Snood 2007-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think this story is excellent. I'm a long time ND fan, and was excited to come to the conclusion. I agree with the commenter that suggested you work on varying your words a bit (said, etc). Also, and this is a personal thing, I hate the phrase "Scared the crap out of..." I Nancy uses it in Chapter 21. Is there another phrase you can use? More imagry or something? Anyway, I think it's great. I'm excited to read some of your other stories. |
| not impressed/kim 2007-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou need to shove this up your ** and crap it out. That's all this story is is one steamy pile of horse **. While you're shoving this up add rosa lunea's story as well. You all are a bunch of pathetic followers who care nothing about good writing so long as Nancy and Frank are put together. You deserve all the terrible writers you have. Do us Super Natural fans a favor and stay at this weak ** unappreciative nancy drew frank hardy site and leave dean and sam to the good writers. |
| Mercedes Whitefox 2007-02-02 ch 24, anon. | abuseWhile Frank's last line-- "We're on our way to the Bahamas, where there is nothing but the promise of sun, sand, and relaxation"--is typical of the end of a Hardy Boys/Drew book, I still can't help but grin. 2 reasons: (1)Typical Hardy quip. (2)Not to mention that the Hardys and Nancy can never go anywhere without stirring up trouble--again--in the form of a case... |
| Roswalyn 2007-02-02 ch 24, | abuseIt's always a bittersweet feeling to watch a great story come to an end -- I'm happy that our trio is safe and sound and lived to detect another day, but I don't have any more updates to look forward to! Of course, you did leave a tantalizing little thread at the end about their vacation, because we know those three can never go on a relaxing vacation together ;-) Meanwhile, I know what it feels like to be drawn to another fandom, so I wish you the best of luck with Supernatural. I know you'll dazzle them as you have us here! This chapter was a nice little bow on top of the story. It had lots of little pieces of humor in it, such as this line from Joe, which was my favorite: "Tonight, it’s the symphony and tomorrow, you’re walking down the aisle." So very much something Joe would say!! It was also nice to see Agent Brennan make an appearance. I really enjoyed his character a lot, and I hope we get to see him again in one of your stories. Congratulations on the completion of another fic well done, Steph! |
| PrincessSkywalkerOrgana 2007-02-01 ch 24, | abuseaww yay. gr8 fic |