When does Orube replace her? If you're talking about the time in the comics during the CxC special, that was in Cornelia's dream sequence. It doesn't actually happen.

Not to seem mean or anything, but YOUR WRITING SUCKS! You knew when you flamed my story, I thought you would be a good author, at least, but then I searched you, and all the fics that I've read so far SUCKED. Not to seem mean or anything.

Your poetry you really need to work on; it's not a poem, it's a list of facts. And you said only child twice. Four words. GET BETTER AT WRITING! My writing is alot better than yours, if you read my fics "Waves of Amber," and "Forever Once More." God, you suck.

Very good, although you put "only child" in there twice. Other than that it was great. I don't have any suggestions right now, I'll have to get back to you on that.