poor poor confused hinamori...

Hmm,

Once more it is the ending that unifies your story, adds strength and voice. A touching voice, and like the others, a strong one.

You have an amazing talent to pull up Hinamori under stress.. and while she isn't one of my favorite characters you bare her to the readers in such a way that its impossible to dislike her.

I wonder though, are all the drabbles centered around this timeline?
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Hey again,

ANother piece I enjoyed a lot, though I have to admit I did struggle a few times before I got the image right. Me being dense as I am :P

The piece is very vivid and muted and powerful.

Awesome work.
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Much better than the last one, save for the three or four missing "e"s at the end of words. Still, that's fixable I suppose.

And naturally "There's no art to find the min's construction in the face" (Macbeth). It's far too easy to decieve the world.

Later,
Rex

I love all your work and some of the drabbles in this collction are no exception.

For me, 'Blood' and 'Disease' are simply stellar. I have read other pieces like 'Languid,' and for some reason I find 'Aim' to be different but a bit boring. I think the lenght was appopriate and the flow was good, but it was somthing about the subject. Maybe the Demon Arts just don't interest me like they should . . .

Well, it isn't bad, I can tell you that. The length of each line as compared to others gives it a sort of flow that's a little interesting. However, there really isn't too much of interest in the story. The rest of your fragments series has been better.

The next will be better,
Rex

Hallo. It's me again. Good chapter.

I like the idea that Hinamori's approach is different.

Hello Davan!
I have a great new for you! (I think). You are my favourite writer in all fanfiction .net!! >__< I adore the manner that you use for describe the situation, all the characters thoughts and the best thing: Your Hinamori. I absolute adore her.
Err... no... I adore you!

I write that review cos I'm a little infuriated... Only five? Well here's another one...

I would like writing more often on every chapter, storys, and of course! In the community of your LJ, but... It's a little hard to me write in english (I'm too lazy).
I have liked this chapter very much especially. At the moment the three are incredible... But I am charmed with the latter!
The final phrase... ah

Those have got to be some of the most interesting euphemisms I've ever heard... I'm quite impressed. I know I couldn't think of that many ways to talk about the horizontal mambo...

Anyway, nice to see you finally managed something happy. I liked this one considerably more than your prior two.

Nice,
Rex

Great writing and all... but why does it all have to be so sad and angsty like...

Nice,
Rex

Very well done, as always.

yay for a new story -or in this chance, set of drabbles- by you. ^^

~Ren

Wootz! More stuff from Davan! What a(n) (unfortunately) rare pleasure!

Hope this won't detract too much from the posting speed of Awakenings. In any case, I look forward to both.

Sweet!
Rex

Yay! Death+angst+HinaHitsu+HITSUGAYA dying= :D

(because I lurve torturing my favorite characters.)