Kekekeke... oh man, is it just me, or is this too great? MM, Hatsy and Tenka. An unusual couple, to be sure, but that's what makes it so fun! Great writing, too - though, could I expect any less from you? "What's life without purin?" Hah. Heeheehee. A valid question indeed. Nice Taikoubou characterisation, too. Bad suusu, bad.

That...was soooo goooood!

I adored this fic. What I like the most is the fact KiHatsu is STILL a pervert at the end despite his newfound serious demeanor.

I STILL like Yuukyou/KiHatsu better, couple-wise ... but I can't help have feelings for poor Tenka at the end. This is the effect that I've been trying for, as one among those who Write. I want to write a story where people will HATE me for making the story end with a character death and wish differently. You've certainly done that here, to me.

While I can SEE why it's inevitable given the setting you put the fic in - within manga timeline - still, as a writer, I enjoy the way you fill the holes between the manga. As a reader, I wished you'd change it, make it an A/U and let Tenka get his ma- er, king in the end. Poor Tenka. *pets him*

Ah, this is such a good fic. It managed to take a character I've never liked (Tenka) and make me feel sympathetic to him. And the end with Ki Hatsu made me smile. I liked the way it retold the story without just repeating the manga. A new perspective! Thanks.

Tenka. And *Ki Hatsu*! XD I love it!

Beautiful story! _ I would never have thought of Tenka and Kihatsu as a couple, but this is a lovely surprise. The characterization is done extremely well, and you have a way with words. I'm looking forward to more (if there is more in the works). _

Wai! This is so sad! Poor Tenka! Wonderfully written, dahling.

looooooved this. you turned me into a hatsu x tenka fan (and yes, in that order XD). i especially loved the way you portrayed hatsu and his thing with "knowing people is something you can't learn" idea. i'd be happy if you wrote more on this couple. ;;

I'm surprised this is the first (serious) fic with Tenka in it! He's normally more popular... Keep writing, I find this pairing very amusing (then again, any pairing with the hentai king is bound to be amusing). And with how you write it, others should too. _

Shi's already helped proofread some of this - and you KNOW that shi likes the way you portray the characters. Hatsy is adorably blatnant as the bi-pervert, and Tenka - well, XD, having Hatsy enlighten him to the facts of life was very much a pleasure to read. Put up the third chapter again, soon! Before shi dies of suspense or something!