Please carry this on.

I really want to know what happens next

XD

Ooh, I'm so liking your fic! I've a big crush on Cillian Murphy, the actor who starred as Jack and I've been searchng through fanfics under Red Eye just so I could imagine him in a sequel!;) Hehe. Actually, I do think that you shuld continue the story. Let it evolve into something more psychotic, funny and even romantic. I've been thinking about making a fic about it myself but seeing this story, it'd be interesting if you can make further updates;) I'm looking forward on how you'll be able to inject some romance between the two; it must be a challenge to connect such troubled characters-then again, that's the most interesting part;) Looking forward to your update! Please don't disappoint us! Good job-excellent writing and ideas!

This is ssuch an awesome story. I love that the plot is original. I can see the firm hiring Lisa. She's a forced to be reckoned with, and if it were not for her convictions she would be an amazing manager. Good job in catching her essence.

fabulous! update soon!

It is a very detailed story and it has the promise of being interesting but I just can't read it. I think it has to do with you insulting your own characters because of their appearances.

"the small chair that he had managed to not crush." - I do not know about you but I have yet to see an overweight man crush a chair by merely sitting on it.

Plese update son!

great chapter and hope update soon. I will wiat for the next you later

I hope Lisa does try to escape anyway. At this point, Jackson is only making vague threats and she really has nothing to lose especially with Jackson's previous comments. Please update soon!

I really like this! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Aww poor Lisa. My head hurts just thinking about it. xD

Good chapter. I think Jackson is severely underestimating Lisa here. Can't wait to see what happens.

cool.

oo intense ] Can't wait for another nice long chapter ]

I like this a lot. I like your style of writing. Good job!

Jackson's back! Yey! But he has short hair. Aw well...

Yeah, anyway, great fic, seriously! Keep it up!