Please, PLEASE! Update this story sometime! Oh, how I love irony! PLEASE update it, and when you do, I'll be back!

Update the freaking story already!

i love it, i wonder if hiroki's plan(humour) will work, i guess i will have to wait!!

its funny...i like it...update soon!

That's great! So funny! And true. You know? The small strange things that are fine on their own add up to a big mistake... Happens to me. Often. x3

Well done.
-NMH

Excellent chapter. Excellent vocabulary in chapters thus far, I love the format and everything. Story thus far has an 8/10, this chapter 8/10. With Millie and Tamiya, do I spy a bit of possible yuri approaching? *Evil grin* Hah, would be funny but not truly fitting this story. Perhaps another story which is an excerpt, but not this one--it would draw from the action that is actually important.

In any case, great chapter and story so far, I can't wait for more.

King Of Jarkonia

One word: Hilarious. Literally, it made me laugh out loud-- well chuckle, but it's a very difficult thing to get me to laugh from a story, increasingly so as I see repeated actions. Though this is interesting, and nearly 100% original (I've seen this plot before, not saying you copied it, just saying it's been done.) I do hope to see more, and I'll go on to the next chapters now. Only expect one more review from me on the latest chapter, just informing you now.

King Of Jarkonia

I have been waiting for quite some time for this fic to be updated and it was so worth it, i just can't wait to see what will happen next.

ok you got to continue this story. you are just too good!

Gak! Cliffhanger. darn. The title fits well... this is really screwed up, but it's not that bad 2 read i guess. Keep going!

Yeah, one big misunderstanding, alright. I loved the Rocky Horror reference and Odd dressing up like "The Sweet Transvestite from Trans , Transylvania!"

Overall, I give this story a 10/10

'**-Armor'. That makes me laugh for some reason.

Continue, this story is excellently written.

Great new chapter, i can't wait to see how this will all turn out.

nice chapter update soon!