 m 2009-10-19 . chapter 1 It is usually hard for me to find a good self insert fic but i lov this one. plz plz plz update. |
 leeyiakun 2009-01-01 . chapter 1 Wow, nice beginning. A unique concept, from a cliche theme.
Your SI is walking into Lacus's hands though. She's the sole manipulator behind Gundam Seed. And her 'Perfect' mask is just that, a mask. No one can really be that naive & manipulative at the same time, yet she pulls it off perfectly. It's got to be mask. That, or she's a Mary-Sue.
Back to what I was saying, It's a bad idea to have your SI spill the 'bean' to Lacus. I can see dark time ahead. |
 Senri Shiki Fan 2008-09-13 . chapter 1Please Update and when are you gonna get your body back? |
 Robby Cartwright 2007-12-08 . chapter 1Great Chapter!! can't wait for more! |
 notBald 2007-10-15 . chapter 1Nice, too bad the story seems dead :( |
 alatnet 2007-07-15 . chapter 1Evangelion.
NOW GIVE ME MY 10 POINTS!?
lol.
This is one of the best self insert fanfic that I have found and read.
PLZ PLZ UPDATE!
Ja ne.
P.S.
Try checking wikipedia for the correct spelling of names... |
 Talon Phoenix 2007-07-13 . chapter 1sweet keep it up |
 Sopchoppy 2007-03-21 . chapter 1Look forward to more. |
 The Lone Sailor 2007-03-17 . chapter 1That was kinda weird. Never read an SI like that before. Similar to what I'm writing but no out of body stuff like that. Reminds me of Xchange. |
 Liam-don 2006-12-15 . chapter 1Terribly cliche.But it's decently written and some scenes are quite funny , and it's not like the Gundam Seed section doesn't need more of those.
I'll come back for the chapter where there is'nt any Lacus Clyne, Since I despise little Miss Perfect. |
 Bandit King Ryou 2006-09-06 . chapter 1most interesting thing i've read
i love the transistion of... yourself(?) to the SEED universe
love the shower...scene
idk why but several it seemed as though you/fllay and lacus would...tango(?)
it would be excelent if you would write more on this, lemons not required, though they are nice, just don't be to overt and completely forward about it. the shower scene is a good example of how it should go, not too descriptive, but enough detail to... satisfy the reader (not in the wrong way mind you, though it does apply to the situation) |
 the-dark-flame-knight 2006-08-29 . chapter 1One hell of a good story so far. I look foreword to reading it! |
 DarkJackel 2006-08-26 . chapter 1Good to see you back Bean. It has been awhile. Interesting idea, you definently didn't God-mode yourself and put yourself in a difficult role to play. I must wonder how things will change, and whether they will be for the better.
Oh and taking Fllay's body for a test drive was hilarous.
-_-Me-_- |
 The Ravaja of Dejeneration 2006-08-21 . chapter 1That was... Cool! I guess... Update it soon... |
 CJ 2006-08-20 . chapter 1 This is an excellent story so far that shows alot of promise. |