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m
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
It is usually hard for me to find a good self insert fic but i lov this one. plz plz plz update.
leeyiakun
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Wow, nice beginning. A unique concept, from a cliche theme.
Your SI is walking into Lacus's hands though. She's the sole manipulator behind Gundam Seed. And her 'Perfect' mask is just that, a mask. No one can really be that naive & manipulative at the same time, yet she pulls it off perfectly. It's got to be mask. That, or she's a Mary-Sue.

Back to what I was saying, It's a bad idea to have your SI spill the 'bean' to Lacus. I can see dark time ahead.
Senri Shiki Fan
2008-09-13 . chapter 1
Please Update and when are you gonna get your body back?
Robby Cartwright
2007-12-08 . chapter 1
Great Chapter!! can't wait for more!
notBald
2007-10-15 . chapter 1
Nice, too bad the story seems dead :(
alatnet
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
Evangelion.
NOW GIVE ME MY 10 POINTS!?
lol.
This is one of the best self insert fanfic that I have found and read.
PLZ PLZ UPDATE!
Ja ne.
P.S.
Try checking wikipedia for the correct spelling of names...
Talon Phoenix
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
sweet keep it up
Sopchoppy
2007-03-21 . chapter 1
Look forward to more.
The Lone Sailor
2007-03-17 . chapter 1
That was kinda weird. Never read an SI like that before. Similar to what I'm writing but no out of body stuff like that. Reminds me of Xchange.
Liam-don
2006-12-15 . chapter 1
Terribly cliche.But it's decently written and some scenes are quite funny , and it's not like the Gundam Seed section doesn't need more of those.

I'll come back for the chapter where there is'nt any Lacus Clyne, Since I despise little Miss Perfect.
Bandit King Ryou
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
most interesting thing i've read

i love the transistion of... yourself(?) to the SEED universe

love the shower...scene

idk why but several it seemed as though you/fllay and lacus would...tango(?)

it would be excelent if you would write more on this, lemons not required, though they are nice, just don't be to overt and completely forward about it. the shower scene is a good example of how it should go, not too descriptive, but enough detail to... satisfy the reader (not in the wrong way mind you, though it does apply to the situation)
the-dark-flame-knight
2006-08-29 . chapter 1
One hell of a good story so far. I look foreword to reading it!
DarkJackel
2006-08-26 . chapter 1
Good to see you back Bean. It has been awhile. Interesting idea, you definently didn't God-mode yourself and put yourself in a difficult role to play. I must wonder how things will change, and whether they will be for the better.

Oh and taking Fllay's body for a test drive was hilarous.

-_-Me-_-
The Ravaja of Dejeneration
2006-08-21 . chapter 1
That was... Cool! I guess... Update it soon...
CJ
2006-08-20 . chapter 1
This is an excellent story so far that shows alot of promise.
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