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| darth rat 2008-05-28 ch 6, | abuseGreat story. But why did Cally have to die?! |
| Oonagh 2006-10-03 ch 6, | abuseBrilliant. Loved your portrayal of Gaeta. And it was easy to by your take on life under Cylon occupation as it seemed so realistic. I'm off to read the sequel now... |
| Mariel3 2006-08-25 ch 6, | abuseWhat a marvelous wrap up! At first, I was feeling things were a little rushed, but with everything going on, I guess it had to be, eh? I loved the recap about everyone's return: the comment about Tigh, the humour regarding Adama and Roslin's meeting... and finished the chapter with a very satisfied sigh. Nicely done! I enjoyed this thoroughly! |
| TrinityKindred 2006-08-25 ch 6, | abuseWow Thank you for writing this, it is the first honest depiction of dee and felix that I have ever read and it was done extremely well. It was nice to see dee as a growing woman trying to find her place in a world that no longer makes any sense, instead of just a coniving ** that is trying to keep starbuck and Apollo apart. It will be interesting to see the direction the show takes with the characters but I hope they go your way, this pairing always made the most sense to me and I am so glad to see it done so well. I'd love to see what you would do with the kara/lee pairing but if this is your only ship I will enjoy reading those as well. Hope to see more from you soon till then take care. TrinityKindred |
| Amara Femi 2006-08-24 ch 5, | abuseMy god, I'm practically nailed to my seat while reading this, another excellent chapter! This is my favorite story right now and I love the frequent updates and the Dee/Felix pairing! |
| Mariel3 2006-08-24 ch 5, | abuseYes,yes,yes,yes. Excellent writing. Suspenseful and descriptive and...totally engrossing. You did a great job with Baltar as Quisling, and I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter. |
| Mariel3 2006-08-23 ch 4, | abuseAn astonishing chapter. Very gripping, and horrible and written perfectly. I hope that makes sense to you. Anyways, well done. I'm feeling very subdued at the moment, trying to take it all in. The setting you've got here is very well done, and totally real feeling. I like the way Dee is slowly coming to see how horrible the cylon regime is - and how Gaeta desperately wants to protect her from knowing how much more horrible it is than she knows... |
| Mariel3 2006-08-23 ch 3, | abuseThis was great. I really like the relationships and the background information and Tigh was simply wonderful. You handle the characters very well, and have me totally enthralled with this story. Thanks for posting! |
| Jenmay 2006-08-22 ch 3, | abuseI love that you chose to focus more on Gaeta and Dee for these chapters. I always enjoyed the supporting characters just as much the main ones--they helped to make the show what it is. You also point out that--as much as I absolutely adore Lee--he can be extremely passive/aggressive and whiny at times, so your negative slant towards him is an interesting change. Hope to read more! |
| Amara Femi 2006-08-22 ch 3, | abuseLoved it! Keep going! |
| Amara Femi 2006-08-21 ch 2, | abuseSo far, I am loving this! For a long time now I have wanted to read stories that explore some sort of a relationship between Gaeta and Dualla, I've always for some reason liked thinking about what kind of a friendship they might have beyond what we see. The writing is lovely, the plot is great and I love this. So thank you so much, I also love that it isn't heavy on Lee/Kara, even though I love those characters! It's just that I have read so much about them. |
| Ammonite 2006-08-21 ch 2, | abuseInteresting plot. Wasn't too sure about the first chapter, particularly the first paragraph where you used the word "town" three times. It's also coming across that you have something against the Lee Adama character - I think your personal feelings are coming through in your fiction and he's not quite ringing true. Actually the whole plot device of him sending her down there alone isn't something he would do - but - I guess for the sake of the story . . . Like the rest of the story and the writing a lot. |
| romeoharvey 2006-08-21 ch 2, | abuseWay to go! This is a good story that doesn't heavily involve Kara or Lee. Can't wait to see more of it. |
| Mariel3 2006-08-21 ch 2, | abuseI hope this is a story you finish - this whole exploration of Gaeta is very interesting and well done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Mariel3 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is mind-blowing - I'm totally enthralled by this story's beginning. You've set up a wonderful situation and have the characters perfectly aligned. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Thanks for posting this! |