Right on! Great song to go with what happened, too!

Nice blending of the song with the story!

Nice job!

u gave the wrong name of the song. this song is 'u give love a bad name'

I really liked your story, it was really great how you blended the lyrics and story line. I even showed it to my friend and she likes it too, keep on writing!

btw, the song is "you give love a bad name". "shot through the heart is a different song from the band's first album.

Very nicely written. I enjoyed it. :)

A brillant mix of music and storyline. This was a lovly look into that horrible day, in which Inuyasha and Ky. Were set up and played for fools. This was a very good one shot.

nice fic, drake. i even found a cool AMV to go with this. go onto youtube and look that up...you should find it