Nice! How long have you been writing? O_O

Every story has some kind of relationship in the end. It's good! =)

*poke poke*

HEEHEE! CHYA! Great fic! I love it, please write more Furaba fics^^

*claps* Very nicely done. The last line is quite powerful. The detailing was done quite nicely also... and I smiled when Haru ate the grass. Nice touch.

-Red Skye

Aw, very sweet. I love your Haru. Nicely done.

this was a wonderful, haru and rin fic! keep, writing good stories!!

That's was one of the sweetest oneshots I've read for Hatsuharu and Rin! I loved the way you described Rin's emotion, it's almost like a novel version of her, done by the creator of the manga herself!

Well, I hope you read more from you!