aw... poor eriol

eriol x tomoyo forever!

ausom story keep them comming!

Wow...that was so deep...

How sad...T.T Eriol x Tomoyo is an awesome couple, and very popular too. ^^ This should have another chapter to it, sounds like there may be room for continuation. Sweet, yet sad, I love it!

Princess Io of Macedonia

this story deserves a CHAPTER 2! please, please, please, MAKE IT! + Cool story.

Gorgeous...

Well, that's depressing. But it was good! Very well written, and beautiful. But sad. *Sigh*

aw...=C I wanna hug eriol...that was ouch...aw...i love your story though hehe..^^ nice story.. ET forever!!

This isn't grammatically correct: "Physically pleassure and emotionally pain mixed together was a bitter sweet taste, almost unbearable" It should be "The mixed feelings of physical pleasure and emotional pain was a bittersweet taste. It was almost unbearable." Great story~ just polish up your grammar and spelling.

I love your story. It's really nice! But poor Eriol!

Man, I loved this story. Please! I beg you to make it longer! Maybe with a happy ending for Eriol?

i loved it and althoug it`s great the way it is i would like very mush if you countinue it.

That was so sad... I really LOVE this couple, and they have to experience this... Nevermind, it was good...

aww man!! such nice love!! but yet she didnt return it :'( That's soo sad!! Eriol!! *hugs eriol* there there

This is so sad... Which makes its it NICE! Arigato!