I'm very much in love with these lines:


“Okay,” Winry whispered to his mouth, “now I think I love you.”

“Yeah,” he answered, “I know. Me, too.”


This was perfect. Thank you. :)

Yeah, nothing like something sweet after a tough day.

Warm and Fuzzies big time. In a fanfiction community with so much angst (not that doesn't have its own time and place :) ) this is nicely refreshing.
Stay Snazzy,
-blackbird

Oh this was beautiful. Sweet and heart-warming without being sappy... my favourite type of fic. They're both so in character and your writing flows so easily, it's a real joy to read. Lovely fic. ^_^

Ah. FMA fluff gets the best of me :]

Oh my goodness. How incredibley sweet was that? I think I got a little teary. Haha... xD If only, if only. -sigh- You know what would make me happy? A sequel. x3 [Not that that's gonna happen- just saying.] Keep writing!

~Edo

Beatiful
I don't exactly 'love' this couple. But the fic is nice.

Such a fluffy story.
Sorry for being such a **, but I hate leaving these things out, don't worry, I don't hate the story for it.
Uh you spelled Edwin 'Edwn'. Sorry!
GURRAGH *arrested*

Jya ne
Peepmeow

Gorgeous work on this one, as well. Wait, you're going to school so you won't have time to write? *kicks* Stoopid skool.

loved it! kawaii! write more!

That was very nicely written and heart-warming :) Romantic, yet realistic. Something that I could see happening in canon one day. Needless to say, I enjoyed reding your story a lot, and I hope you continue writing!

That was so cute! I loved it!

-giggle- it's one of the those cute little one shots that makes you smile. Very cute. loved it & [ FAVE ]

Love. it.
`xo
LUNAMARiA