I absolutely love this piece of work.

You have the characters down pat, down to the mannerisms and everything. I really can't wait for the next part!

Take care!

Heyy Great story. I have some questions though. This last chapter confused me a little bit. What did Bellatrix and Rodolphus mean when they were talking about their marriage.

"His change in subject made me stop. “Husband you may be, but not lover,” I hissed in return.

“Of course not. I’m not stupid. The Dark Lord forbade me from touching you. You should know most of all what happens to those who go against his orders. Not to mention you’d probably have hexed it off anyways.”

Cue the fourth revelation of the night. All these years, Rodolphus had lied to me. I eyed him over, a smug look rested on his face. For the first time, he resonated with power.

“But you don’t love me,” I stammered.

“Of course I don’t. You’re an impossible creature. I can’t even say if he loves you, but he certainly has a special interest in you.”

“You’re only here to make sure I stay safe,” I whispered. Pieces were beginning to make sense for me.

“If anyone else knew the truth of your attachment to the Dark Lord, they’d kill you, Bellatrix. Surely you know that.”

“That’s the only reason you married me?”

Rodolphus took a deep breath before answering. “As I said, one does not defy the Dark Lord’s commands.”"




If you could take the time to explain that to me, I'd really appreciate it. I love your story. Keep updating!

I've been waiting for this since you told me of your idea for it. I am so excited with where you're planning on taking it and look forward to all the 'tales'.
I like your Regulus. I like how he contrasts with the way Sirius speaks of him as being the perfect son and I like how together he seem's to be, how much he just gets it on a larger level. Most importantly, you've added a huge amount of depth to the character (both implictly and explictly), without making him steal the spotlight from the 'big story' (being the septology).
Can't wait for the next chapter.