IT WAS ABOUT TIME!! WRITE MORE! really good, the feelings of the characters are played out very well, so write more!

Please continue this one, I already love it!
More sparrabeth, pretty please?
Ta,
~Saskia~

really good so far, i like it
and i was just wondering if those were song lyrics at the beginning of the other chapters or something else?

I'm so glad you decided to continue with this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

i absolutely love it.

I totally can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon and keep it coming!!

Haha, Elizabeth thought it was Will the whole time. Poor lass. Great story though, keep going.

Chapter 2 made me bloody cry.

CRY!

IT WAS SO SWEET!

and...I loved the ending. Lizzie has a SURPRISE!

=]


PLEASE Update soon!

i lik ethi sversion better then the real one. lol JE all the way for me. update soon!

You write very well. I really enjoyed this and I can't wait for updates. :)

Beautiful story.

nice, very nice! i really enjoyed the ending, and look forward to the next chapter, if there is one to be... :) cheers.

Really good. please write more, cause i can't wait!

Oh! I really like this! :)
Please update soon!

Damn!

Just... damn!

... Jack... ahh!

Elizabeth before she went **... adorable together I must confess. Well anything with a great rendition of Jack is bound to be wonderful. Love ya! Bee