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Was such an amazing story I loved the relationship and the description in the diolouge was amazing I could actually see them speaking and hear them ! Just such an amazing story thank you for writing and finishing

its amazing keep up da good work.

Wonderful characterization, definitely looking forward to anything more on either of the couples :D

Love the Story, and i hope to read more on these 2 or on his brother. O and you dont have to worry so much on FF geting angry if u put in the sex part, hints the M for Mature. Please keep up the good work I will deffinetly read more of ur stories.

great story would love to see a sequel )

I really liked this entire fic, but the ending was rushed. Besides that... awesome!

Awesome! My one peeve is I can't find the lemon anywhere. I looked at your livejournal account but couldn't find it there. Do you have it up anywhere online?

r u gunna have a sequl.

this story reminds me of my wow bf. i was a nightelf druid named Zonna. I was rather weak and when i encounterd a troll while on a quest i was sure i would be slaughterd but he just smiled at me. i was confused so i smiled back. he noticed i was on a quest and decided 2 help me with it. afterwards we just hung out and sent a bunch of emotes at each other u know like hug kiss smile flirt. we eventually decided 2 have relations {in the game obviosly}. He took me 2 his homeland and i moved there 2 b with him. i miss him so. my computer unfourtanetly had horrible trouble with wow so i can no longer see him. i may write a fanfic or 2 sumtime.

anyway luv ur story

Ahhh this whole story was beautiful! Gosh I re-read it all the time and every time I do, I still get butterflies on the lovey-dovey parts. Hehe. you know what would be amazing?

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If you made a sequel of their new life. Ehehee! I'm sure I'm not the first person to say so either :) Please consider it!

Ok, this is the sweetest fanfic I've ever read!

The final dialogue helped everything move on quicker. I could see their facial expressions in my mind as a consequence of your clear wording and how well you had familiarized me to the characters' personalities.

Just out of curiosity, do you have this in AFF?

This story reminds me of something I lived through. Your characters have so much depth to them I wonder if you based them on real people. I love this story; it stands out even if my WoW fanfic diet consists primarily of my main Nelf/Troll. Thank you.

Excellent story. I absolutely loved it! Your characters are amazing. Your storyline was inspiring. The second love story was absolutely fantastic! I loved it!

With that said I have one minor critique. I noticed that you described Lorkan and Celysel as having light blue skin, the both of them. But at the end of your story Celysel ended up with purple skin and Lorkan as having green skin. You did the same with your description of Jaxton. You described him in the beginning as having one set of hair and skin coloring, then later he had a different color of hair and skin. I realize with time passing in between chapters you can forget these small details, but I'm only telling you so you can keep an eye out for such things in future stories.

Other then that, I completely loved your story and would read anything else you have written. :)

heeheehee :D cute!