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Daw, that was so cute! I loved every bit of it. The ending was fantastic, and makes me all fuzzy wuzzy inside. xD

I'd just suggest perhaps getting a beta-reader or proofreading your work; their were some typos in there that sort of stopped the flow of the reading.

Other then that, great story, I'm glad I read it. :3 Cheers.

Ice

Hey do I get props? Because you know the thing where it says,

"Well, that's where I belong.. and you belong with me.

Not swallowed in the sea."

Yes, I figured it out...thats from COLDPLAY!! I was listening to that song ALL day!! Very nice how you put that into the story. :]

Sincerely,

haleyXsparrow

Aw... It's over? Shame that it is... Why couldnt she give the compass to me??! Instead of throwing it away... ah well that's not really part of the oh-so-brilliant story is it... this is fantasmo

I loved this. Especially, "...he found the greatest depth of the sea in all it's encasing glory within her eyes..." Great work! Can't wait to read your next fic! ^_^

this was wonderful, one of the best stories i have ever read. keep up the good work and i hope your next story is just as good as this one.

Yes, yes, yes! That was beautiful! I LOVE happy endings :o)
You really can be proud of this, it's excellent work and I love it all the way.
Now I'm looking forward to your next sparrabeth story ;o)
Thanks for sharing it with us.

Take care

~Saskia~

Bravo. Bravo. Loved it.

OH for the love of god!

Why the hell did you have to stop now??

I want to know what will happen to them, what about Will?(I hate him... but still)

Please tell me you´re gonna continue this soon!

I really don´t know what to say. You have such a beautiful way with words.
"slicing the dead air between them"- don´t know why, but I really liked this little part.

Great job.

The story had everything one could wish for. Drama, angst, suspense, romance and of course Lizzy and Jack.

this is angsty beond belief!
but it was really good
you showed a different side of Jack
that no one really shows, its
his more vonerable side (Sorry about spelling lol)

Aww, that was sweet.

omg! i love it! pleaseplease PLEASE write a sequal!

A-FREAKIN-MAZING!

-Nicole

It's one of the most beautiful JE stories i've ever read.Please continue.

I thibk that is the best version of Jack and Lizzie getting together that I have yet read ^_^

I just finished reading this and aside from a few typos, I must say it was rather good. Hopefully, you'll be updating in the near future? ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow.

I only saw the movie yesterday (heh heh) and now I can't get enough of JackElizabeth. I can't wait to see movie 3 on May 25th!

Great fic! i'm really looking forward to part 4 - what's gonna happen?