Score one for Spotty-Boy! WOO HOO! lol i really liked this story

YAY This was good! I liked it mucho!

Yay! Wonderful story! Totally loved it! And yay for Spot and Race! Yay Sprace!! Wonderful. Lovely. Loved it.

MushLover

D: i hate spot! uh! die! ohh noo dl kl;djf.

wow, i'm a bad reviewer.. :)
anywho, sorry for not reviewing all the chapters... college is crazy busy, and I've just got the time now to read it all.
EXCELLENT. I love sprace, and this is just WOW. I literally was like 'WHAT?' when Caroline cheated on Race with Pie. and I loved how Caroline and Race reconciled, and even laughed about it.
and AW at the last line. :)
another wonderful story!
-Braids

Aww, now this was a great ending. I still can't believe Caroline didn't freak out on him. Then again she was guilty too. And I was shocked to find out that the baby wasn't his. I have a question though. What's wrong with Aaron Lohr's chest hair? I've never actually seen it. Is it weird? Just a question.

In the back of my mind I had a feeling she was cheating on him. But I didn't want to say anything just in case she wasn't. And with Pie of all people. That's just crazy. I am so glad that Spot is being the reasonable one. Someone needs to be there for Tony. I'm glad it's him. Great chapter.

Oh my God, should I think it's funny that he couldn't get it up? I do, that should tell him something right there. Some kind of alarm should be going off in his head. Saying 'You know, something isn't right here.' Sorry, I'm in a hyper mood. Great chapter.

Won’t Race’s mom be surprised to find that not only is her baby boy’s true love is Irish, he’s a guy.

“Um, what about Junior and Maria?”
“I talked to Stephen about them. He says he doesn't really want to take care of another man's children.

What the hell? She doesn’t want the kids? What kind of a mother is she? She doesn’t deserve them! And he doesn’t want to take care of another man’s children? I love my Pie, but these two deserve each other! I was hoping that Race and Spot would get the kids but I expected her to at least put up a fight.

“So...” Spot gives me a little impish grin. “Does this mean we can get married and adopt little Ethiopian babies?”
I smack him on the back of his head. “We're not getting married, and I already have two babies, but you can adopt them if you'd like.”
He smiles a little even as he rubs his head. “So we're going to be together?”
“Yeah, I figure I'll keep you around. You're useful for some things.”

Yay! Everyone is happy! Especially me! I love a happy ending. And I love it when I get my way.

This was a wonderful story. And yes, I did obsess just a bit, but that will happen when I find a really good story. Thanks for the mention, and for the great late night entertainment. Aaron is yours so you can have him without chest hair if you like, but I still think it’s hot!

Aw man! It can't just end? =scratch the question mark= Oh well. There's what? Another five stories floating out there? And here I am getting tortured by my grass jelly drink. The jelly won't come out.

Anyways. It can't end! Well ... it can ... and did ... but that's beside the point.

Whatever. I might review again when I'm actually thinking.

I walk into my bedroom to find my wife on my bed, writhing under the touch of a man who isn't me and sighing a name that isn't mine.
“Is that...” Spot says from behind me.
I stand frozen in the doorway, my mouth hanging open. “I think it is.”
“Huh,” he says. “That must be why they called him Pie Eater. You know, I always wondered about that.”

Those have to be the greatest lines in the history of fanfiction! I bow to your greatness!
That is the best explanation of Pie’s name . . . EVER.

You’ve made Spot so sweet and gentle, yet he’s still a bit of a smart-**. I don’t know how you did it.

This chapter made me extremely happy!

First of all I have to say that your chapter title is the best I’ve ever seen. You definitely get ten points for that one!

I understand that Caroline is asking the usual questions that a wife would ask her husband, but she makes me want to shout; None of your damn business, already!

Houston - - We have failure to launch.

Caroline’s hormones must be way off the charts. Last night she was ** and now she’s trying to climb the guy.

That scene was amazingly intense.

When Race said “Get off.” And “Caro, can you just stop?” It was like the proverbial shoe dropping.

Nicely done!

Is Caroline a Prohibitionist or something? She sure sets her knickers twisted when Race takes a drink or two.

I adore your Spot. He is trying so hard not to put any additional pressure on Race. He’s definitely become wiser and more understanding with age.

I loved your description of Spot sleeping:
“. . . I find myself smiling a little at the sight, the way he still looks like he's about sixteen years old... I figure he'll probably always look like that. The corners of his mouth are turned up like they always are, and he looks so completely peaceful.”

This is getting good. I'm glad Race intiated things. That was a big step for him. I still say Caroline is acting weird. Even if she is pregnant. And I've been around enought pregnant woman to know that. But this chappie was great.

I LOVE your stories... I always get super happy when one gets updated, and I think this is my favorite of the new ones. Hmm, is Ms Caroline cheating on Race with, say, Pie Eater? Maybe? Hurry and write! AHH!