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fanficismything
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseXD Omg if there were any more fluff in this, it would explode. But high fluff level is good! XD It's very cute and I love that last line... Well... last paragraph/two lines.
Audry Kai
2006-10-10
ch 1,
abuseI...I...I...I LOVED THAT! And For some reason, while i was listening to 'My December' by Linkin park, it created a mood. It worked perfectly. Anyway, on to talk about how great your story was, although, i think you could've put in more ShikaIno, the HinaNaru was very much appreciated. Those are two of my favorite pairings. It seems like everything was sort of from Ino's perspective, only not her personal thoughts. just kind of her personal thoughts. there was no 'I', there we go. It's been a while since i've seen someone qrite like that, you did it wonderfully. I love it. hehehehe. Noodle country.

FAVORITE PART:
(How any of the three ninjas counted as acceptable ‘taste-testers’, she didn’t know.)

I LOVE THAT PART. It made me laugh. just like 'Noodle country'.

GREAT STORY!

P.S. I hope this wasn't too long.
P.P.S.(?) Now i'm just making it longer.
P.P.P.s(?) I'M SHUTTING UP NOW! THIS WAS GREAT, KEEP IT UP.
Shady Bishie
2006-09-21
ch 1,
abuseAw...how adorable ^^ I loved this fic. Great job!
Dark
2006-08-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseCute!! I liked it. n_n

Especially the end.
Annie
2006-08-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseHehe...I like it a lot! It was cute and I definitly liked the parenthesis in there. It lightened the mood very effectively (sp?) Anyway, it was adorable. Keep up the good work!^_^

Oh, and the title fit perfectly with the story.
Amaya no Hime
2006-08-21
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting. I liked it a LOT. I like NaruHina and ShikaIno but why have you posted this fic under NaruIno? Some NaruIno fans don't like these two pairings.
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