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Reviews for: How Far Can We Run?
crest of music
2006-08-22 . chapter 3
Sorry I'm to lazy to sign in right now. Umm I think all of the shorts are cute.
Unproper Grammar
2006-08-22 . chapter 3
Aww, I loved the one with the vase, it was too cute.

Keep up the great work.
radiobird
2006-08-20 . chapter 1
It's cute and pretty good. It seemed a tiny bit cliche, but fluff often is. I think maybe one more sentence would have been nice, to give a stronger feel to it. Than again, that's just my personal preference. Anyway, I like this overall, the running through the park gives it an interesting feel.
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