That was really good. The ending could have been a little more in detail but other than it was well written.

Great job! I'm glad that Viola didn't turn into a killer. _ Kind of short for me though.

I LOVE THIS STORY!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

DONT LEAVE ME ON A CLIFFHANGER!

ACTING-SINGING-BELLA

nice ! your story was very cool to read !

OMG, you really know how to write a damn story. You know that? When an author puts his or her emotion in to the stroy, the readers can feel it. Just like i felt it. A pain in my chest. That shows me that your a damn good writer. Write more about it. And maybe longer! lol You should really write more about How justin was mad and everything else. Put youself in everyones's diffrent perspectives. And you were right about the twin pain thing. I'm a twin, and my sister broke her arm once and right before it hapenned i fet pain in my arm. Wierd huh? She can read my thoughts sometimes. and i can feel her emotions. It's a twin things. You may not believe me, but it happens.

Keep writing, your good

Basketball whiz

wow this chapter was amazing with the turn of events like how viola didnt die im burstimg because it would of been so sad if you would have had her killed off

the story is a little confusing and other than that it is still good i just cant belive viola died its sad

It was good! Kind of a sucky ending though.

OH NO

VIOLA

great story

great story

wow, i love it...great and sweet and full of sadness. i absolutely loved the sebastien moment when he says "it's viola" : so sweet and its the reality of the twins lol. the justin mooment at the end, a little cheesy, but still awesome lol.

i hope you won't stop writing she's the man stories !

Malicia

That was pretty awesome, good job, I imagined something similar to what Viola did to Justin, gj at not killing him (although i don't like him it's good you didn't turn Viola into some murderer) :D write more!

I couldn't stop reading the whole story i loved it and u had me in tears the whole time! I am very sad that u will not be writing anymore:(

Justice Hope

that was good