Wow! Just... wow. A beautiful, haunting two-hanky piece. Prose, almost. Well done.

That was very, very good. No. Better than good. Hmm, there just isn't a word that would fit. But, it was more than very, very good.

This is excellent! Very romantic, very touching... Love the dream sequences, especially Michael's!

I like this story. I like how you put the dreams in. The story line was great, I hope you write another one.